Reviews for Breaking the Rules
mollypop2015 chapter 14 . 9/5/2010
applause goes to you this was a very beautiful story! thank u
ImperfectAshley chapter 14 . 8/20/2010
i loved how it ended it was great and i was kinda weirded out when you wrote that maria came back. but i like how you made her son a decent guy that had manner and was very respectful. i made me think that just because your raised by a certain type of person doesn't mean you cant be different
ImperfectAshley chapter 11 . 8/20/2010
i cried so much after i read this. i reminded me of last month when my niece was born. we thought we where going to lose both her and my little sister. after a while my sister got better but my niece got worse i was so bad that i couldn't even stand to see her in the hospital. after bout a week she finally got better. but this chapter was just so sad all i thought about was that week. :-) very good chapter no mater how sad it made me
ImperfectAshley chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
ok that was just to good thats what he gets for being the ass he is to bella. i cant believe he thought she would just take it
ImperfectAshley chapter 3 . 8/20/2010
ok now i have never heard of any jas being this much of an ass lol so rude of him its still funny that jas is so mean i hate it admit it but i kinda like it to a certain point that is
ImperfectAshley chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
ok the kiss man what an ass i mean you dont just grab someone kiss them and then pull away and telling them that they better not tell anyone. like a kiss was like murdering someone seriously hes insane im starting to question his sanity at the moment lol
shahnazzie chapter 14 . 8/17/2010
That was so AMAZING! I love all human stories with these characters and Jasper and Bella together. I also love that you wrote so much! So good! _ [p.s. Jasper as a dad was too funny XD]
Mercyrus chapter 14 . 8/12/2010
what else is there to say? great story.

The best part about it? you didn't feel the need to throw a lemon in EVERY chapter-all things are good in moderation...you get that. Love it!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 14 . 8/11/2010
i loved this story its very good i was laughin at the part where she was 15 and he was 10 the date and will the finger part or the blackbelt alo at the end what jasper said about eddie. Omg i knew Maria was gonna come back i just knew i was just waitin for you to put that bitch in the story oh and her son that was good he is like perfect and he is a bitch
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
holy shit what a fuckin dick good story though
AmandaWhitlockMeraz14 chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
bella is such a badass i love it
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
i love rosalie in this story i also love how its not just the cullens together like how you added people for edward and alice instead of having them together
baWDolf chapter 13 . 8/1/2010
lmao my cat is named Penelope Lane ( obviously i have cats rather than children :P )
Sassyvampmama chapter 14 . 7/31/2010
Hehehe! Awesome story... loved all of the songs, and the unbelievable rules! Too funny.
Aster Mason chapter 14 . 7/14/2010
It was so awesome!

I squealed so many times I'm sure my family thought I was Losing it and I usually don't do that.

Great!

:D
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