Reviews for Inviting Trouble
Kaizen Kitty chapter 5 . 12/30/2015
:-) it's been 3 years - well, nearly. time for an update!
Kaizen Kitty chapter 3 . 12/30/2015
:3 great chapter - loads of backstory
but
wait, shouldn't it be pounds? (not dollars) since Near and Mello are grocery shopping in London (the UK)?
as always excellent characterization - I do hope you'll finish this story. it would be such a joy to read.
Ha! so Light and Misa are Kira in this AU version as well?
Kaizen Kitty chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
This this this is really interesting. :-) Got used to your way of stringing words together, and the AU situation is very bery cool and intrigues me. Characterization is spot on and the plot thickens... I also like the detail you include in your descriptions - makes for a good reading experience. XD and lol the fortune cookie! ... :-) smell of moth balls and elderly cat urine? is this taken from first hand experience? I love the way you describe Mello's attire, it's very funny.
Kaizen Kitty chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
Very well written, and although the sentences are a little too long and too correct to my taste, I must say you did a very fine job on this and had me hooked from the first few paragraphs. A striking representation of Near, Mello, the characterization fits and I'm enjoying the serious tone of this fic. :-) Thank you!
L chapter 5 . 3/21/2015
I know you're not likely to update this anytime soon, but I want you to know how enjoyable your writing is. I keep coming back to this story due its awesomeness. )
serenesorceress chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Hope you're still interested in continuing this?
X chapter 5 . 10/19/2014
Good!
Meiwriter chapter 5 . 8/12/2014
Awesooooooome stooorrrryyyyyy
XD lovely writing
Scully chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
I am really really enjoying this fic! Its hard to find a story where one of the central characters aren't ooc. You do an excellent job! I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Rei chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
Aww poor Near, Mello didn't know that his words actually hurt Near. Plus him drinking will only result in recklessness. Good chapter please update soon!
Rei chapter 4 . 8/18/2013
So Light's dad died?! How and aww poor Mello having to deal with the overload of sweet curtsy of L xD
Rei chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
That was awesome! So no wonder L and Near live together! I love how Matt is so cool here and when he asked L, "You're not. Uh. Havingsexwithhim?" I swear I laughed cause of how L must have felt.
Rei chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
Good to see that Kira is the major case in this story and that fortune! Near needs to pay close attention soon :) good chapter and I love that you introduced Light!
Rei chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
An interesting way to start off the story! It sounds really good :)
inactiveaccount777 chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
Really good chapter! I love how you write Mello and Near interactions. :)
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