|Reviews for A Circular Conversation|
| Musafreen chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
How bout a new bike?
This pairing is so adorable. And the entire conversation was so in character for them. XD
| IvyBean chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Awesomenessssss O_O Cute too! X3
| empathapathique chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This was wonderful! Great work!
| LSPK136 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
No need for a lot of words. It was simple, yet smart.
| Pokeshipper94 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Umm I dunno if u check reviews for this anymore but I just wanted to say I love your writing especially aaml! This was so cute lol and I'm glad to see people are still into aaml today ). Keep it up )
| Pokeshipper chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
| Tomoyo Kinomoto chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
This is really sweet. It's extremely well written and in character, plus is just generally amusing. Man, Misty'll never let him live the bike down.
I like how you wrote this all in dialogue. It made Ash's awkwardness more pronounced.
| Spottedfire chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
This plot id definitely portrayed in only conversation! The characters are . . . well, in character. I luvs it! 3
| StraightPokeshipper4EVER chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
One word: EPIC
Love this story. Definitely love this story. I was going LOL the whole story. Actually, I'm kind of guilty for only reviewing after reading this the second time around...
Even though it's purely conversation, you pulled out a great story. And Ash and Misty are so in-character... (Definitely can imagine Ash *buying* a ring...) And Misty, the devious Misty...
"Ha. You'll have to do a little more shopping before that happens."
"Oh? And what, exactly, would I need to buy you?"
"Hmm… how about a new bike?"
ROLF... She never got over the bike, did she? Well, that what makes Misty...
Anyway, It's a great story! Keep up the good work!
| Crystalgurl101 chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
ROFLMAO! That last line was P-R-I-C-E-L-E-S-S! That was SO cute and funny! Typical Ash and Misty. x3 Loved it loved it loved it!
| depression76 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
LOLZ. Cute and somehow I can imagine ash being in this particular situation.
see you around!
| Warlordess chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This is just. . . fantastic. I mean, WOW. I loved that you were able to pull off the conversation so well without any help from a narration. I've never even thought about the possibility before. Mostly 'cause I use the narration to experience a character's thoughts and reasons for being. But for THIS? Nice.
I might check out your other stuffs later, m'kay? Tee hee.
| Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
First off, I adore the summary of this fic. Hands-down, it's one of the more eye-catching summaries I've stumbled across lately (and I've noticed several other fics of yours are cleverly summarized, too. Summaries aren't always easy to write, but you seem to have them down-pat!). Based on the summary alone, I had a feeling I'd be in for a treat with this story, and I wasn't dissapointed, either.
Dialogue-only stories are an acquired taste, but I have to say I didn't mind the style in this story at all. You wrote Ash and Misty's conversation in such a way that their dialogue easily sets the stage and paints pictures in our minds, (without going into painstaking details about Misty's doorstep, or going into overly mushy details about the kiss). The implications on this story (ie. "connotations") were smart, too. Instead of spoon-feeding everything to the readers, a large amount of this fic is tastefully implied. We all know what Ash intends behind the ring anyway, so we don't need gritty details about the obvious. The story feels more mature and less cliche that way, so kudos!
And I'm glad Ash didn't get a direct answer, either. Although I think it's safe to assume what Misty's answer will be, she's not the type to give Ash a direct answer (especially since he's been gone for so long and shows up out of the blue). Again, the implications/subleties in this fic were not only tasteful, but very fitting for the characters (especially Misty). I'm glad she didn't just throw her arms around Ash, teary-eyed, shout "YES!" and make out with him (which obnoxiously happens so many times in other AAMRNs). Misty's too proud for that, even if she *wants* to give into temptations of hugs/kisses/etc. The bottom line: I loved the style of character portrayals in this fic. (Though I'll admit, I'm mind-boggled our dense Ash Ketchum even understands those "connotations," but he's bound to have grown up eventually _).
All in all, adorable one-shot. It attracted me from the very beginning to the very end. Thank you for sharing this! I'll be sure to check out more of your Pokemon fics in the future. _
| d i n o b o t chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I absolutely adore one-shots like these; strictly words, no descriptions. It forces the reader to fill in what's happening on their own; that's what makes it so fun to read.
| Me chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Pure gold. So funny, so...lovable XD