Reviews for A Circular Conversation
Cristipotter chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Oh my... that was both simple and amazing at the same time!

"How about a new bike?"

Priceless.

May Pokeshipping live forever. Thank you for this XD
Sango The Lecher Slayer chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
So. Cute.

Perfect.

Thank you for writing!
tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Loved the bike reference. I usually twitch when reading JUST dialogue, but your fic totally blew me away. The words/phrases seemed to characterize the story so fluidly. :) A wonderful hidden pearl.

Fantastic story.

P.S.- I love that ending! -steals bike- :D
ELMO-kibafangirl11 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
lol, always with the bike, hah

well, it was a little unexpected, i was somewhat expecting a story, rather than a conversation, but it's still good. it goes somewhere, and i know WHERE, somewhat/probably, so thats always good.

it's smart, i'll say that. like a phone conversation... which dumb-ol'-ash couldnt manage.

hahahaha

see ya later!
PinkCamellia chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Aw.

This is so cute! And so Ash!

Great job!
AstroLatte chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I love this, so in-character and that twist at the end made the entire story!

You're amazing!
A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
hahaha! poor Ash! :D

luve,

Fairy!
Property Of Eriol chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Hahaha! That was definately a lol type oneshot! loved it!
Kohryu chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
STILL WITH THE BIKE!
MalachiteFlames chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Hahaha, very amusing. This is so great. Very well written, and so like Ash.

Nicely done!

AF
Ronmione x3 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
That ending was absolutely PRICELESS. It had 'Misty' written all over it, haha! And gotta love that Ash. xD

Hope you write more AAML.
Lindzasaurus chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Aww, too cute! And completely in-character, too. :D Awesome job! No one can write it better than you, Maiden of the Moon. 33
DefineNormal140 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Cute. Easy to read. Cute. A pairing I ship. Overall I quite liked it. Although I HAD been wishing for sloppy makeouts...ah well, Ce la vie! ;)
MoltresFeather chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
lol spectacular oneshot. ash is a dumb dumb lol.

great story, one shots are always amusing to me.
friends and p-f4ever chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
lol. I love the ending. Nice work
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