Reviews for Love Takes Time
loser in the gutter chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
aw! five stars! so adorable. roy's so amazing for waiting. great plot, great everything!
mrawgirl09 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
This has been a VERY awesome treat for me! XD Especially after being so sick for the last few days. GastricitisHigh Fever Sux. XD I really don't know what to say, apart from that I really love this story, with its humour and love and OMG HOTNESS and Daphne and Sam and Teen Roy and fainting Al and XD and that I really love you to~

But anyways.

You're right, this is long, but this is something like what I'd expecty a ... YOUR onshots to be. XD

Not only I'm saving this in my faves list, I'm putting it in my bookmark pages for perfect oneshots!

Yay YOU!
anmbcuconnfan chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Very well done, I enjoyed this story a great deal! It did seem somewhat rushed at the end, but still, considering how long it was, I could understand why! It was fabulous, and I bow to you in continued awe!
efioa-s chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Jeezum that was long. Took me almost a whole day to read it. Though the fact that I was half asleep when I started and kept reading the same paragraph over and over. It was after reading it at least 10 times that I realised that I had already read it.

Great story. So cute. Sam reminds me of my own dog. He has all the grace of a baby elephant and his bark shakes the whole house. And he's as fat as a barrel. That's because he keeps stealing our food though. And he's a lazy ass.

Cute story, I loved it. I love Daphne. She's the cooliest.

Keep up the good work!

plippy chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
creative and cool!
Twisted Vixen chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Heh, I've been reading a lot of your stories the last few days...and have been way too lazy and too busy to review. But this one I had to cuz it's just awesome! One of the best time travel fics I've read. Roy's attempts at alchemy had me in giggles. And you can't help but go "aww" at the fact that Roy waited so long for Ed. :)
his paper wings chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Sweet, definately long for a one shot...I think my eyes are burning. This had me going AW...although I was slightly amused that Ed just sorta left Al...wonder what everyone's reaction would be's be priceless I bet. Thank you for taking the time to write this.

Becoming-Obsessed chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
This story was A-MA-ZING!

moonstone glows chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Sque! This is adorable, and funny, and sweet. I love an insecure Roy!
GreedxEd chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I loved it! It is soo adorable and just wonderful. You should do their wedding!
8765434567 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
gives an A and some cookies!
MikadzukiOokami chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
aw so sweet. i love it.
elementsofcreation chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
*Sque* Thats about all I can think of right now!

I really enjoyed reading this! Roys attempts at alchemy had me rolling on the floor with laughter! There were so many cute sweet moments! This will definately be one I come back to again and again! Its going to be a long night for them both XD
LazyLamia chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Wonderful story, even if it holds so much sadness. It’s so cruel that Roy had to wait so many years for his love, but this also shows strenght of his feelings – he has decided to do this knowingly and being aware of consequences.

And to think that Ed is responsible for his ignition gloves’ improvement and in some way for his reputation – at last he gave Roy some reassurance and sort of incentive not to give up on his alchemy.

I’ve noticed that this one shot consist of about 30.0 words - it’s more less one third of The Gate's Ultimatum which has 26 chapters – I must admit that this kind of one shot suits me fine.
White Mage Koorii chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Another wonderful Winds of Water fic... and I loved every moment of it.

You know I really love this sort of fic, the whole temporality thing makes for a fun story I think; when used properly anyway. One of my other favorite pairings to read uses it A LOT. Particularly to have them meet the ones younger self like this -chuckles.-

This fic made me crazy kinds of happy. I love how you write Roy and Ed. Roy's such a gooey puddle of cute in this.

Sam reminds me of my own labrador who passed on back in april. He was big, fat, and happy to.

Lovely oneshot. Lovely LONG oneshot... I like long oneshots.
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