|Reviews for Gears of War: Night of the Locusts|
| Jonesybites chapter 10 . 11/18/2009
I had to start from the beginning so I'm late on the review...my apologies.
The idea is a good one, I just hope you don't abandon ship when you get hauled off to eat the pavement.
Anyhoot, the moving back and forth between the squads gets confusing, but I say this with everyone's FF when they split between multiple events and POV's, so it may be just me. But the reason I say this is because it breaks up the flow, cutting the sequences to where I have to keep going back to try and remember what happened previously...but if that's what you intended to do, then just ignore me.
| I'm a Dinosaur so like rawr chapter 6 . 6/14/2009
Hey great chapter but where did you learn about Echo squad? That squad is in the book along with Gamma and Bravo.
| I'm a Dinosaur so like rawr chapter 2 . 6/13/2009
It's starting to make sense now.
| I'm a Dinosaur so like rawr chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
I kinda don't understand why they would do that especially Prescott.I've also written a story please reveiw it because this a great story and I wrote a great story.I'm stilltrying to finish it.