|Reviews for Breaking Points|
| chavelaprincess chapter 11 . 12/3/2017
Stunningly well written. Love it.
| Katsy17 chapter 11 . 12/23/2016
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 10 . 12/19/2016
What a lovely ending :)
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 8 . 12/19/2016
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
This just keeps getting better and better. It's so nice how they're opening up to each other! :)
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 6 . 12/19/2016
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 5 . 12/19/2016
Awww, what a beautifully tender chapter. Wonderful writing, and storytelling :)
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
This is soooo, sooo brilliant! :D Eeeep!
| AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Very nice scenario :)
| zentraedi chapter 11 . 12/10/2016
This was a truly wonderful story from start to end, had me tearful at the end. Wonderful!
| EiswolfZero chapter 11 . 10/15/2016
Gosh, this story.
The pining and Prime Spocks meddling with both of them
And the deep friendship Jim forged with him (and the way AOS spock got jealous)
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
Amazing story I have enjoyed it greatly :)
| AutumnLeaves11 chapter 11 . 8/3/2016
So many thanks for sharing this story! It's AMAZING!
You portrayed the characters' development in such a believable and unique way, and the older Spock's behaviour really make so much sense! I love the way you described the state of a mind-meld and the jealousy Spock (the younger one) beginns to feel... I think I'll just have to re-read it after having finished it just now :D
| elfgirl13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
Spock is a Commander, not a Lieutenant Commander. Scotty and Bones are Lieutenant Commanders.
| NymphettEcho chapter 11 . 9/6/2015
This was beautifully done. I don't even know where to begin. I think all I can say is brava and thank you :) I will be searching for your other stories on LJ