Reviews for Breaking Points
chavelaprincess chapter 11 . 12/3/2017
Stunningly well written. Love it.
Katsy17 chapter 11 . 12/23/2016
fantastic
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 10 . 12/19/2016
What a lovely ending :)
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 8 . 12/19/2016
Oh Spock...
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
This just keeps getting better and better. It's so nice how they're opening up to each other! :)
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 6 . 12/19/2016
Auwwwwww!
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 5 . 12/19/2016
Awww, what a beautifully tender chapter. Wonderful writing, and storytelling :)
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
This is soooo, sooo brilliant! :D Eeeep!
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Very nice scenario :)
zentraedi chapter 11 . 12/10/2016
This was a truly wonderful story from start to end, had me tearful at the end. Wonderful!
Eiswolf-Zero chapter 11 . 10/15/2016
Gosh, this story.
The pining and Prime Spocks meddling with both of them
And the deep friendship Jim forged with him (and the way AOS spock got jealous)

Loved it!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
Amazing story I have enjoyed it greatly :)
AutumnLeaves11 chapter 11 . 8/3/2016
So many thanks for sharing this story! It's AMAZING!
You portrayed the characters' development in such a believable and unique way, and the older Spock's behaviour really make so much sense! I love the way you described the state of a mind-meld and the jealousy Spock (the younger one) beginns to feel... I think I'll just have to re-read it after having finished it just now :D
elfgirl13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
Spock is a Commander, not a Lieutenant Commander. Scotty and Bones are Lieutenant Commanders.
NymphettEcho chapter 11 . 9/6/2015
This was beautifully done. I don't even know where to begin. I think all I can say is brava and thank you :) I will be searching for your other stories on LJ

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