|Reviews for The Cullen's holiday|
| chantz chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
Hey,don't give up on writing I like your chapters their good and humorous! I know sometimes you don't know what to write,or if people will actually like what your writing,but don't give up on it. You said you know what you want too write,so write it,its the only way your going too know if people like it or not! I hope you keep on writing,I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter!:)
| Cfings753469 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Snails and frogs legs sound gross!1!11!11!1!1!1!1!11!1!1!1!1!1!11!11!1!11
Yes, I did mean to put the 1's in
| Cfings753469 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
You need to put "None of the Cullens are" instead of "None of the Cullens is"
| xXLove Me xx Hate MeXx chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Write some more I luvs it
| scarletwinter56 chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
HA HA! I've actually read it now! And I have to say, it's pretty good. The storyline is good, but I wonder where you're going with the story? Is it an actual plotline, or is it just going to be about the trip and then the story ends? I can see what you mean about the grammar, but it's not shockingly bad. Also, my offer still stands if you want me to edit for you. Keep writing please, and I hope you get over your writer's block soon! scarlet
| scarletwinter56 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Didn't actually read the chapter, but I'm sure it's awesome. Um, I'm just reviewing it so I can come back to it later. Yeah, keep writing! If you want, I can spell check it for you, um, PM me if you want my email so I can spell and grammar check it. But yeah. AWESOME (probably). xx scarlet
| MagicWeMade chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
keep on writing and add some humor, have something sweet and let yourself go hypo
| MagicWeMade chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
i loved this chapter Rebecca, your a great writing and there were only like a couple of mistakes keep writing
| IndependentBeauty chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
nice chapter... keep writing becx
| Anonymmous chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Yes Yes Yes!11
| poopy spastic rabbit chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
1. think about a spastic rabbit just imagen it
2. i love your story
from poopy spastic rabbit
| IndependentBeauty chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
thats funniness on wheels! haha love it keep writing!
| littlemissluubear chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
aww... to bad about the jellybeans eh?
the tenses werent THAT mucked up
aww renesmee is soo cute
shes cool XD
"why dont you play with grandma?"
i like that line
its kinda weird for me to like it though...
it makes Esme seem so OLD
aww seth was all alone
I like Nessie's point of view
its funny coz in renesmee's point of view,
people are like, grandma and mum and dad
but in everyone elses, its like edward or esme or bella, whatever.
thats not fair! coke is nice...
especially after jelly beans
and gummy bears
feeding snails and frogs. thats...
That'd be gross!
yay! Now you can update!
cullens holiday to the rescue!