Reviews for The Cullen's holiday
chantz chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
Hey,don't give up on writing I like your chapters their good and humorous! I know sometimes you don't know what to write,or if people will actually like what your writing,but don't give up on it. You said you know what you want too write,so write it,its the only way your going too know if people like it or not! I hope you keep on writing,I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter!:)
Cfings753469 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Snails and frogs legs sound gross!1!11!11!1!1!1!1!11!1!1!1!1!1!11!11!1!11


Yes, I did mean to put the 1's in
Cfings753469 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
You need to put "None of the Cullens are" instead of "None of the Cullens is"
xXLove Me xx Hate MeXx chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Write some more I luvs it

scarletwinter56 chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
HA HA! I've actually read it now! And I have to say, it's pretty good. The storyline is good, but I wonder where you're going with the story? Is it an actual plotline, or is it just going to be about the trip and then the story ends? I can see what you mean about the grammar, but it's not shockingly bad. Also, my offer still stands if you want me to edit for you. Keep writing please, and I hope you get over your writer's block soon! scarlet
scarletwinter56 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Didn't actually read the chapter, but I'm sure it's awesome. Um, I'm just reviewing it so I can come back to it later. Yeah, keep writing! If you want, I can spell check it for you, um, PM me if you want my email so I can spell and grammar check it. But yeah. AWESOME (probably). xx scarlet
MagicWeMade chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
keep on writing and add some humor, have something sweet and let yourself go hypo
MagicWeMade chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
i loved this chapter Rebecca, your a great writing and there were only like a couple of mistakes keep writing
IndependentBeauty chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
nice chapter... keep writing becx
Anonymmous chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Yes Yes Yes!11
poopy spastic rabbit chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
1. think about a spastic rabbit just imagen it

2. i love your story

from poopy spastic rabbit
IndependentBeauty chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
thats funniness on wheels! haha love it keep writing!

littlemissluubear chapter 1 . 5/20/2009

aww... to bad about the jellybeans eh?


the tenses werent THAT mucked up

aww renesmee is soo cute

shes cool XD


"why dont you play with grandma?"

i like that line

its kinda weird for me to like it though...

it makes Esme seem so OLD


aww seth was all alone

I like Nessie's point of view

shesso cool!

its funny coz in renesmee's point of view,

people are like, grandma and mum and dad

but in everyone elses, its like edward or esme or bella, whatever.




thats not fair! coke is nice...

especially after jelly beans

and snakes

and gummy bears

and chocolate

and lollies

and hyperness


feeding snails and frogs. thats...


lol, jacob-ish.

That'd be gross!


i like


yay! Now you can update!


cullens holiday to the rescue!