Reviews for Fog is Rising
X-Breath of Fresh Air-X chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Oh wow...that's about all I can say it left me speechless, I liked your take on things and as much as I like the Don Angell thing they had going I'm glad that if (god forbid) something does happen to Don I hope he does't go with Angell. Great story made me think of this song "You can run, you can hide, but you can't escape my love..." Escape- Enrique Iglesias
Bryn Elizabeth chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Ah-mazing. This is exactly what I was on the hunt for today. Yayz!
funsized2467 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
i loved it!

this was amazing!

good job!
mbnola chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Yes, while it was dark it was amazingly well written with good emotion without going overboard. I love how Don asks if Jess is hurt with her wound and her response. Very bittersweet, but I loved it!
csiwendy07 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
That was amazing. Great job writing it. I'm in tears. Nice work :)
bookwrangler chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Awesome! If you consider that dark, you need to meet my muse and lighten her up a bit. Anyway, very poignant. So good that he could be with Jess just one more time. Still so sad that he's gone. Very, very glad that you didn't send Don into that white light. Thank you.
rebeck chapter 1 . 5/20/2009