|Reviews for Through the Fire|
| Cindar chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
I look forwards to the next update I have been enjoying this a lot. Would love to see more character interaction. Happy New Year!
| Anony-moose chapter 6 . 9/17/2013
So I felt it was a little rushed. The term is humanly possible, not humanely. Humanly refers to homo sapiens whereas humanely means kindly (or a least not cruelly). Yea that's about it. Although what was the random comment about a female twin? And please explain why this guy is such a threat. Because he can uncover their secrets?
| Anony-moose chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
So I still don't understand why Tanner did it. I mean, obviously he loved the dude's sister, but what did he have to gain from scaring him?
| Anony-moose chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
So I take back my earlier comment about not understanding the Vlad thing since I now realize his last name is Masters.. Also plural of passerby is passersby and you should know that since this is the second time you have used an incorrect singular. Thirdly, I am almost positive a flight from Illinois to London would take longer than that, and as I flew British Airways from London to Chicago, I am slightly offended that you said their service/food/entertainment was bad. It was one of the best flight experiences I've had and my flight count is in the thirties so that's saying something!
| Anony-moose chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
Pk, so I understand killing the parents (maybe... just a little...), and I don't hate you (but there's still time). However, there is something I don't understand. Gin and Vodka never said Vlad's name and yet Danny seemed to know who they were talking about. How? Danny doesn't speak Japanese obviously and I feel this is a minor but important flaw.
| Karyn Phantom chapter 9 . 8/23/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 9 . 8/13/2013
*whistles* Looks like there's a bit of a wait between chapters, but the writing quality is definitely going up. Good luck, Yan and Shadow. I look forward to future installments. - Matsuri
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 7 . 8/13/2013
Huh, so it's a multi-crossover with RK (I suspect).
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Chaos is Sam, doy. Kinesis - Jazz? (Why?) Red - Valerie, double doy.
And I'm guessing Tucker wanted Japanese names on account of the black hats.
This is interesting. (But wait, isn't Danny canonically rather lousy at reading people? There are reasons for his canon nickname "Clueless One", and Sam isn't the only reason.)
| Lunan chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
This is an unbelievably awesome crossover! However, one little detail you didn't get quite right is that in most Japanese schools the students don't move between classrooms for different periods, the teachers relocate instead.
Other than that hiccup, your writing is very engaging and most certainly lacking the ever so annoying mass grammar and spelling errors that make a story not worth the effort to read (products of writers that don't bother to check their work).
I'm looking forward to new chapters, keep up the good work!
Cheers, and good luck with your college endeavors!
| Emori Loul chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
So this chapter takes place right before the beginning of Detective Conan? Kudo's going to be driven to near insanity - he's going to get drugged, turned into a kid, and from where this looks like its going, instead of any policeman finding him, it's gonna be Danny. As in, Mr. Existing-Defies-All-Kudo-Believes-In Fenton. I can't WAIT. Talk about Detective Conan in a new light!
Please update? This is awesome!
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
I have been waiting FOREVER! Please try to get the next chapter out sooner this time.
P.S. Great job at showing off Danny's deductive skills and I can't wait till he meets Kaito Kid, Conan (real identity or disguise), and Henji. I wonder what the detectives (and thief's) reaction to Danny's ghost form will be.
| sarah360 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is amazing. I really want to know how it ends! If this is only an introduction, the main story will be much more awesome! please don't abandon this fic!please!
| SakuraKoi chapter 9 . 4/16/2013
Then they meet Gin and Vodka!
| SakuraKoi chapter 8 . 4/16/2013