|Reviews for Homecoming|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
| Maunzeli chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Are you really a captain? This was way better than the show came up with and much more likely to have happened. And this is my third time through your reading list. Unfortunately no one else writes as good a plot nor as fascinating characters as you do. Re-runs of Elizabeth are better than any of the new stories being posted.
| megamom2 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
This was lovely! I loved the pacing and the depth of the relationship you built for them!
| Lanaa Taurof chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
An extremely well done job with this. I know it stands outside of canon, but very well done, indeed. You got me to tear up twice, once when Tony said Ziva's neck looked lonely and a second time in the very last paragraph. That, to me, is the truest sign of good writing: the ability to make the reader cry. The reader should feel the sadness if there is sadness, and you did a marvelous job with this story. Thank you for sharing.
| zats chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
A very good possiblity of what might happen. Hopefully we will find out soon.
| Autumn Dae chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Aw, that was really, really good. Excellent. I loved it. The perfect balance of sweetness and rightness. Loved it.
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Well it's a trust that must be earned and I'm glad that they trust each other again.
| Meatball42 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Sweet story, very realistic. I love Tony's present.
| Aalliya chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
*claps* bravo! wonderful story again!
| tigerlily25 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
I'm wondering how I only just found this now, almost two months after it was written. Damn, that was a fine piece of writing. So very realistic and matter-of-fact, and yet still sweet and hopeful.
I really appreciated the cyclical nature of it - beginning and ending with the issue of trust, and Tony's comment about her rescue, giving her the star... all the little things. There's just so much I like about this story. ;)
I wish I could trust the NCIS writers to fix what they broke. They got some 'splainin' to do in September. In the meantime, I'll (hopefully) keep finding wonderful stories like this. Thanks for sharing.
| dkscully1121 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
So sweet. So sad that it took them a whole year to get back there. Here's hoping it does not take that long come this fall...
| SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
love the ending
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
| Judroozz chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Will there come more?
I hope so!