Reviews for Unforgiving
Misty Blue chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Oohi, despite that... chilling ending, I truly admire Rattrap for this... this courage he shows. I know, right? Rattrap and courage? Ha, impossible! But beneath that "we're all gonna die" facade, I definitely believe that this smal Maximal rat has a big, and even stronger heart. Yes, you heard me right, Ratty! Haha!

Nice! A look into all that has happened in Rattrap's POV! An awesome, marvelous piece!
Scarlet Thorrn chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
hmmmmmm...

lol well this was interesting XD
Anodythe chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I never liked the Vok. It seemed that they took credit for way too much.

Fantastic first story. yeah, i am a bit late, just stumbles across your newest story. I think I'll start from the beginning.
annea101 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
hope you continue with this one it could make for a very intresting pot line
Tiberius chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
A nice sort of aside on Rattrap's part, his reflection not only forward the plot but they also shed light on his own motivations as they pertain to the Vok and their machinations.

Interesting touch showing the Vok's subtle taste for vengeance.
Deepclaw chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Very nice with Rattrap and the Vok! I thought they were IC. :3 I guess you have Airazor and Tigatron captured before the end of Season One then? I was kinda thrown for a lop on that but then I realized what you were talking about. Epiphany moment, gotta love them. XDD

It's short and concise, simple but very effective in conveying the characters' thoughts. The talk between the Vok sounds totally like how I imagine the Vok might speak about their experiment. Scientist ghosts. Oi. -_-' LOL

Your grammar's good and their dialogue is IC, 'specially RT's thoughts.

Good job! :D :D

And Welcome Back to the Fandom. ;D :3

~Dal X3