Reviews for New California Dreaming
Charlie019 chapter 22 . 11/8/2011
First fallout story to make it into my favourites.

Damn good story bro.
Janizary chapter 22 . 11/7/2011
Whatever has got your motivation up keep at it! Two updates in as many weeks. I love it.

I realized today when reading this chapter that another hallmark that makes your writing stand out is the way you've handled some of the 'bad guys'. So many times, 'raiders' are just faceless bugaboos that are inserted in Fallout stories for effect. In more than a few cases you've taken the time to add flavor to the settings, expanding, and sometimes explaining some parts of their lives, drives, desires, etc. Even if they end up dead in a few more sentences, that time taken to flesh a few things out is an attractive quality in writing that draws me, as the reader, more into the story, providing a full-color back-drop to the environment, rather than paper stage props that you often see if FF.
jdboss1 chapter 22 . 11/7/2011
I god i do love reading this
Howard Russell chapter 22 . 11/7/2011
Great story.

I loved how you had the Doc Hoff refuse the weapons. I had expected the game to do so too, for the same reasons. It was disappointing that it didn't. It would have made the game richer.
Cyberweasel89 chapter 22 . 11/6/2011
Oh, so you're still updating? I thought you had abandoned this story when you never replied to any of my reviews. Nice to see you're still writing. :)
Cyberweasel89 chapter 20 . 11/6/2011
Oh my god, that was awesome. Great exchange between Coyle, the AntAgonizer and the Mechanist. XDDD
Cyberweasel89 chapter 19 . 11/6/2011
Yay! I honestly didn't think it would happen. It's been a whole will-they-won't-they thing, and those usually never get settled.

Now we just have to hope neither of them dies...
Cyberweasel89 chapter 17 . 11/6/2011
Really? Doctor Barrows runs the town? I always got the notion Winthrop was the unofficial leader. He's the first one to greet you, after all, and seems to be the spokesperson for the town.
Cyberweasel89 chapter 16 . 11/6/2011
What do you mean, the Brotherhood can't replace their losses? The Capital Wasteland Brotherhood of Steel deviated from what the Codex says. That includes recruited ordinary wastelanders. Paladin Kodiak was even recruited from the Pitt.
Gogolu chapter 22 . 11/6/2011
Thatguy chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Listen love the story but I had an idea thought I d run it past you, coyle is so badass nothing is really giving him any trouble I say you make him hunted by some crazy west brotherhood of steel guy?
Krow Blood chapter 22 . 11/6/2011
"Knock knock' he said coldly.

'Who there' one of the Super-Mutants responded.

'The one' Coyle replied.

'The one who?'

'The one who you don't want to fuck with' Coyle told it, pulling both triggers."

That one...

Was worse than the Super mutant one.
DarthNacho chapter 22 . 11/6/2011
Now I'm kind of interested in where you are taking this story? Will we see a cameo with the Lone Wanderer and that's all, or do you plan a little more. Right now it just seems to be the wonderful adventures of Coyle and friends, which is fun and all, but are we going to stumble onto a plot or something else nice and juicy? I mean I like the story... but it feels stagnant.
Scotius chapter 22 . 11/6/2011
OK, that was a what? 200 milicoyles? Cant be much more - there were only two Supies. 100 milicoyles per mutant killed at point blank range sounds about right *nods* All right, maybe 50 more for raking two kills at once.
Whouvoodoo chapter 21 . 11/6/2011
I have to say this is one of the best fics I've ever read.
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