Reviews for New California Dreaming
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 1/18/2015
its good to see that coyle gave megaton a hand, i wonder what he will think of the nuke?
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 1/18/2015
it seems like coyle is an old hand at wasteland justice: he's bound to get plenty more experience if he stays around the capitol for long
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 1/18/2015
its safe to say that youve put more thought into the wasteland economy then the devs did...
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 1/18/2015
and so the travelers have arrived in the capitol wasteland, good point about the relative desolation of dc compared to the buildings left standing
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 1/18/2015
its a shame that ncr's in no position to take action against their old enemys, a ranger platoon could really put a dent in the mutant/enclave/outcast ranks
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
if that gauss rifle is anything like the one in Fo3 then coyle might just be the deadlyest man in DC
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
im more familliar with fallout 3 and new vegas then 1/2 but if your characters are any indication your off to a good start
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
This is one of, if not the best fallout fanfics out there. Really wish we could see it completed.
killerbbb chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
I wonder why this story has updated in a LONG time. hopefully it's nothing major
lazyguy90 chapter 24 . 2/20/2014
Great work on this story.

I'm really enjoying this.

Keep at it.
Jack the Sparrow chapter 14 . 2/4/2014
this fic has given me a hole new outlook of the NCR, I rely like it! :)
Jack the Sparrow chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
only 5 chapters in and I've already lamo like 7 times! XD
Jack the Sparrow chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
now this is my 2nd time (or going to be) reading this story, with that said, I really hope Coyle's perspective of this chapter of the BOS improves, and I really hope you get around to finishing this story ITS FUCKING AWSOME! XD
Jack the Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
there's lore after like every paragraph, I love it! XD
Mokrie Dela chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
I won't go into details about the tiny errors i saw (PM me if you want me to do so).

I absolutely loved the opening. Straight into the middle of something. Bam! From the off i'm getting a straight sense of character. I'm writing a fallout FF, and i'm finding it hard to get the FEELING right. It's too vague, but i'm getting it full on here. I've played 3 and NV and a TINY bit of 1/2, so straight away, I'm feeling it.

Your characters feel well developed (apart from one or two instances, but they might in intentional)

I like the inclusion of a motorcycle, too - i'd planned that for mine, ever since seeing them in 3 and thinking "why hasn't anyone repaired them?"
The motorcycle and the sort of arrogance Coyle has ("It's called a vocabulary") is very effective in telling us that the NCR is developing well. A nice contrast you can play on here - referencing that, with Coyle almost comparing it with where he finds himself.

There's 20 chapters to go though here, so that'll take quite a while, but I think i've stumbled onto something I'm going to enjoy. Nice work!
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