|Reviews for Pretty Wings|
| Divine Lustre chapter 1 . 1/15
This is so perfectly and brilliantly written. I love how realistically you portray the characters.
The way you weaved LP's history, their individual idiosyncrasies and fused those characteristics to give Sawyer her inherited physical and mental attributes was amazing.
I'm very late to the party, but so glad I stumbled on this masterpiece. You're a really talented author!
| lp chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Truly can not see Lucas not give into Peyton about having more kids. Nope. He gave in after ONE argument with Sawyer and to make a huge decision with out talking to a doctor yyyyeh nope.
| happylpislove chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
perfect one shot tho I hate that everyone thinks she would have complications w/ baby#2 or they would not chance it bc if .001 percentage it can possibly happen much less to the same couple. ..not to mention Peyton's faith about their baby -one of the best parts of s6 bc SHE for once had faith and belief about fate and happy endings :)))))
| Cherrifan82 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I loved it.
| xoxotaylor chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
OH MY GAH!
i never reviewed this! wtf? you should slap me. you really really really should.
I DESERVE TO BE SLAPPED! but yes. i, just, can't believe i never reviewed! omg!
so i honestly don't know what to say. i really don't. i can't find hte right words to describe how, amazing and brilliant and epic and wonderful and brilliant this is... so maybe this will help...
xEscape 011 (7:18:26 PM): what's with your face?
nvr lose hope92 (7:18:52 PM): i'm reading pretty wings.
xEscape 011 (7:19:01 PM): awh!
nvr lose hope92 (7:19:10 PM): yeah, hence why i have that redic grin on my face.
xEscape 011 (7:19:14 PM): lol
nvr lose hope92 (7:19:28 PM): this face reading sheena
nvr lose hope92 (7:20:19 PM): that was so EPIC!
xEscape 011 (7:20:26 PM): Yes
see? you always are in our IM's.
and idk. i feel kinda bad. cause like, you write this AMAZING thing, and i can't find the right words to describe how much i love it! cause i do. i read it ALOT. usually i don't have time to read it ALL, so today was hte first time i'd have a chance to read it ALL the way through. &i forgot how much i loved the ending.
and just, yeah. i hate those 3 letters tho, dangit.
at least their not at the end of 'is there something i can send you'...
btw, i love my subtle-ness, haha. jk.
okay. off to eat ice cream. &, btw, sorry for attacking your IM with all those pics.
&YES, i'm subscibing to the story. cause thats how i roll.
| randi-jane.0tH chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Wow. I love your writing already, but I could definitely see every part of this story happening in the show. Plus you painted such a pretty picture in my head. I don't have anything bad to say. Keep writing!
| anyonebutyou3 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I had read this when you first published it and I forgot to add it to my favourties. I spent half an hour trying to find the story. lol I just re-read it, and I still love it as much as I did first time I read it. It's perfect. I love the converstaion between LP at the end when they talk about only having Sawyer. I think that's just a really sweet moment. Anyway added it to my favourites this time round. lol Great fic.
| chocolatemud14 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
that was awesome.
| music-is-love10 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
God, I loved this. Loved it so much. It was sweet and funny and TOTALLY Lucas Peyton in the future. I can imagine that happening in the show, it was perfect. I loved the way you had her love story be the opposite of LP and I loved how you showed them when they're older and she's dancing with Ben. My favorite part was when Sawyer and Lucas were talking about saying I love you to Ben & the cookies. I love reading EVERYTHING you write, you're an amazing writer. :)
| SomeYouGiveAway chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Wow this was really really beautiful.. Amazing job writing it! I really like to think this is the way their story will take it's journey! Especially since we never going to see how Sawyer grows up and how Lucas&Peyton would have raised her, is it awesome to have an image in your head of what it will be like with the three of them, and you just wrote my perfect imagination of that! ) Oh and I totally cracked up at this comment of Peyton; "Better than almost beating them with a rake," xD
| A-shiningstar chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Perfect! So perfect! The direction everything took seemed very logical. The description of the relationship...father- daughter, mother-daughter, husband-wife...it made sense character wise and was so very beautiful written.
Very VERY well done! :)
| WDE11 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I have to agree that I, too, have thought they would have LP play out similiar to what you did (with Lucas getting a job elsewhere.) BUT I adore how you wrote out their life as Sawyer grew up. I also loved 624, but I have to say, I wished they would have had Peyton deliever earlier in the season so we could have enjoyed LP with Sawyer for longer than half an episode. I hope your fics will continue to fill that void. :)
| leytonaddict23 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
If I say that that was perfect I UNDERestimate it but I can't find more words! Mind-blowing really! You have me crying happy tears because I love LP so bad and I love the way you wrote their life! I freaking adore Lucas&Sawyer! I wish we got to see more of them! Thanks for writing all these amazing Fan Fics! You're the best!
| iNsPired 61 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
another excellent writing, thnx. shame you won't write anymore after season 6? is that what you meant when you said you wouldn't tune in anymore?
| ficwriter4 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
oh god, this was exactly what I needed. It was perfect, all the way from the very beginning with them deciding on moving (which should totally happen on the season premier btw) to the end where she says, "don't you mean peyton scott?" ah it was so good. once again you blow me away. thank you so much!