|Reviews for Return to Prince Manor|
| ImagineShine chapter 11 . 2/9
HA! The Three Musketeers! Loved the movies ...didn't care for the book as much, but anywho... thanks for putting that reference in. It made my day.
BTW Ive been reading a bunch of your HP stories and I love how you can do so many versions of the same people. _
| elena everdeen jackson chapter 72 . 2/9
im sorry about your relatives, yes death is a important factor in life. something you can grow from but that does not make it any easier. and how is your sister I saw last chapter that she had surgery for breast cancer and I hope that it all went well. I know this is kind of late to ask but considering that I just started the prince manor series maybe a week and a half ago at most.
| elena everdeen jackson chapter 43 . 2/6
I just thought of something that book that shows all of their ancestors related by fae blood wouldn't harry have shown up in it once he was born so meaning if severus looked in it he would see that harry was related to the fae also.
| elena everdeen jackson chapter 34 . 2/6
im in love with the story. I love how you said it looked like harry was conducting an Orchestra not many people even know what that is. I read that and I almost yelled out yes.
| ABT COD chapter 78 . 1/27
My name is Azan Basit and before I begin let me tell you that this review regards all of the story. You did a magnificent job writing this fanfiction. This the best fanfiction I have read about Harry Potter(series) along with Hidden Prodigy by Mr. Oakzzz. It is also a fanfiction that has Severus friendly with Harry and Petunia is also kind of good. You referred in the most mature way to Intercourse with a simple word: love-making, it doesn't put any bad image in your for Baba Yaga, your choice to redeem her is a great one as everyone can be redeemed except the most villainous creature like Vorldemort. However you take too long to arrive at the point and the chapters shoulld be shortened.
| Merlin's baggy bottom chapter 3 . 1/26
It's a great story but takes forever to get to the point, if the summer (the whole first story) was condensed in to the key 50k of words then this one gets to the point faster it would be great. But that is my option and it is excellently written and planned out.
| excessivelyperky chapter 78 . 1/1
What a wonderful story! And I just bet that in a few decades there will be Victoria's Special Flying Beds, by Appointment to the Ministry.
Thank you so much.
| SnowflakePhoenix chapter 78 . 12/22/2013
this was amazing I read the first one and it left me wanting more and then I found this and I instantly fell in love. I love the Father/son thing with Snape and Harry and you captured it wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of your work and from what I've seen I won't be disappointed.
| excessivelyperky chapter 77 . 12/20/2013
What a great chapter! Yes, Sirius deserves to be a teacher. And a father. Especially when his daughter will be conspiring with her cousin at all times.
The oral paste sounds intriguing, but I still vote for peppermint schnapps, since it can be taken internally by the parents as well.
Ah, dear Umbridge, why hasn't Minerva Transfigured her into a pink kitty yet?
I love Snape's birthday! It was really nice.
And Toria walking-how splendid!
| excessivelyperky chapter 76 . 12/6/2013
Oh, very good chapter! And Sirius must be insane, coming between Snape and a semi-colicky baby. That's stupid even for a Marauders. But if things work out right, he'll have a little girl, too, and Petunia will laugh, and laugh, and laugh.
And I expect that Snape is laughing himself (once he got Victoria to sleep) at Sirius needing help disciplining his students.
It serves Harry and Hermione right having to discourage first-year idiots who want to be heroes. At least they don't have to cope with a Headmaster giving them over a hundred points for being stupid, or with the first years knowing how many points the Trio earned over time trying to kill themselves.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
| KitsuneTurner chapter 78 . 12/1/2013
I have to say I have fallen in love with your writing style. Your stories just pull me in. I have spent many a night staying up late reading. You know just how to pull me in. I laughed,cried and even got angry at points. I really hope you write another story with the Snape family. I want to read many more stories with them in it!
| excessivelyperky chapter 75 . 11/19/2013
Good chapter. I'm glad that Severus is a hands-on daddy now; he needs it as much as Victoria does.
I can hardly wait till Sirius Blacks gets to teach the Weasley twins. And I hope he doesn't start pranking Snape 'just for fun'. Sadly, Albus will probably think the pranks are funny again.
And the people who spoil Victoria too much should have the privilege of tending her through both teething and tummyache.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 78 . 11/10/2013
Poor stupid Albus! Pity there's not more! :-D
| Noble Korhedron chapter 74 . 11/10/2013
"Merlin's pants, young lady! Beating up your father is not allowed." *cracks up laughing*