Reviews for Twilight An Alternative Ending
e chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
please write soon
xavier chapter 7 . 9/4/2009
i hated this chapter sorry
Blood And Fangs27 chapter 9 . 9/3/2009
i loved it please update soon!
Kelliebud25 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
this was so good
shaleann chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
very good... keep writing!
shaleann chapter 3 . 8/3/2009
I think it's good except for the fact that his eyes were golden in the hospital and then when you got to his point of view you said he needed to hunt. Very imaginative and well written though.
Lullabelly chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
omg! what kind of person leaves a cliffy like that?

i mean come on!

love this story!

can't wait for an update!
hda951 chapter 7 . 7/7/2009
whao! continue! luv this story! but when she is in the hospital she is in arizona. where she got hurt in the ballet studio!
Lullabelly chapter 6 . 6/27/2009
what was with that dream? It was scary

It sounded like what happened to voldemort in the end of the first movie LOL

Love this story! Can't wait for an update!
twilightknight2000 chapter 6 . 6/24/2009
ohh! i cant wait for the next chapter

uptade soon or ill die
jaspers golden angel chapter 5 . 6/13/2009

chapter 5!

that was really good!

i like the ending line XD

i think u should bring Jacob into the story somehow since she wont remember him aswell

i dunno if this is a good idea or not

but then it could be a love triangle like Bella is unsure who to love since they are both saying they love her (but of course she will have a stronger connection to Edward no matter what)its just an idea


Alli (jaspers golden angel)
Lullabelly chapter 5 . 6/13/2009

i want her to scream at the top of her lungs and get edward to come back in! i want her to admit her love and get back together!

i love this story!

can't wait for an update!
Lullabelly chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
oh! i want to know what is going to happen next!

i love this story!

can't wait for an update!
EnPixieKnapp chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
great :D i really liked this chapter :)
jaspers golden angel chapter 4 . 6/8/2009

wow great chapter!

im home sick today so a new chapter was a great thing to relieve me of my boredom.

i also finished the next chapter of my fanfict.

your chapters are getting better and better

so keep writting.

i really like the bit when Renee was dreaming of Carlisle teehee

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