|Reviews for In Darkness|
| Ellih chapter 14 . 9/11/2017
God, what is this? Impressive. I had to control myself not to read everything in one day because I wanted this story to last longer in my mind. Your writing is very fluid, your characters are all very well built and you laugh and suffer with them (more suffering in this one, honestly lol) because they are very real and captivating.
I love everything about this story, including the risks you took and there are many of them (yes, chapter 4, I'm looking at you lol). Props to you for not shy away in showing very popular characters doing despicable things.
Also, I love the way you wrote Sailor Venus, a fearless leader and a lovely friend. The memory of Luna and Artemis destroyed me ... I was so sad for her, I think she was under great pressure. The dialogue she had with Ms. Mizuno broke my heart too, described the lack of hope so well. I wish I could get into the story and give a big hug to her and Serena T_T
The end is sad, but that's the way it should be. But I will not lie, I would love to read a sequel about how they met again, they trying to bring Serena back, having to deal with everything they did with each other. Would it be cliche? yes, but it would make my heart happy 3
Anyway, thank you very much for have written this piece of art. I was living a very hard moment in work, having to deal with anxiety and stuff, and your story helped me a lot.
| Princesakarlita411 chapter 14 . 7/2/2017
| jesi ki kage chapter 14 . 7/19/2015
WAHH! T_T I mean we knew she would do it but still! All that pain and suffering! It sucks that she took their memories but it was definitely the right decision. But WAH! Such a good, emotional story! Thank you so much for writing even if multiple times I wanted to hit you for the pain they were feeling. Great story. -Jesi Ki Kage
| amethystlightx chapter 14 . 6/20/2015
The ending was so sad! I definitely wasn't expecting it, but it was such q beautiful ending in a way. The story was really just amazing. I can't wait to see if you have anymore sailor moon stories.
Solaria Sunstone xxxc(:
| RD chapter 4 . 2/28/2015
I just read chapter 4. Holy. Crap.
I had an inkling, but damn. Whoa. I can't believe I just stumbled onto your story tonight. Can't put it down.
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/13/2015
OMG! That's amazing. Breathtaking. And sad. I'm in tears, it's so powerful. Half the time I forgot that I wasn't reading a published book by a really famous author. I loved that and even if the ending was so sad and depressing, it was a breathtaking end. I hope you enjoyed writing this because it was Amazing!
| slightlyxjaded chapter 14 . 12/15/2014
Wow...so um that was not at all what I had expected to happen! What a tearful ending! Hope for the future, possibly?! Like holy crap, I can still not get over it! This was a fantastic story and you've had me hooked for days! Your writing style made the whole story that much more intriguing! Your characterizations were amazing...each character had so much depth! And your memories were very illustrative! The rape bothered me...a lot. I guess I could've expected it with a "dark" story, but I was still not ready. It didn't really make sense and possibly could have been avoided. Besides that, I really enjoyed this story with its dark undertones...especially Jadeite and Endymion's ponderings about what the darkness meant and where the line between the two sides was drawn. I will assume that they all were reincarnated later and thus there was a happy ending because honestly, they all needed it after the hell they had been through. Again, your characters were nothing short of amazing and my heart skipped a beat several times (notably, after Endymion slammed Usagi against the ground and thought he killed her). I am beyond impressed. Thank you so much for this amazing story!
| N.J chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Here are my 5 questions. 1. Any idea on when or where the fanfic took place? 2. How old was anyone that was in the fanfic? 3. Any clue on what power any of the Sailor Senshi are at in the fanfic? 4. How might they have gotten to that level? 5. How long could they have been at that level for? Be sure to clear this bit up for me.
| Rassgulla1 chapter 14 . 9/12/2014
Wow...amazing. Although I am a true believer in the happy ending, this was exactly the right way for this story to end. Beautifully done. However, if you wanted to add an epilogue or sequel that makes this a happy ending, my soul would be happy inside.
| Abby Normale chapter 14 . 4/27/2014
This story was so sad, so heartbreaking and so amazingly wonderful. It was beautifully written and I loved the ending. By far one of my favorite Sailor Moon stories!
| Andrew O'Brien chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Dark very dark but a lot of interesting questions are brought up
| angeljme chapter 13 . 3/21/2014
i was thinking that usagi should just killed herself to make all of this backfire... but heck, you thought of that too and removed as an option
even the outers were removed... no rest for the weary... last chapter to go
| angeljme chapter 3 . 3/20/2014
goodness! what a chapter
1st that awesome fight scene of Mercury, where she turned blood bender. then that emotionally draining scene with the cats
you're one awesome writer... hands-down
| Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
Amazing simply amazing.
| Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
Hey the memory was not terrible.