Reviews for Imperfect Contrition
Viola Cornuta chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
so nice Edward listened to his mother-sign of a smart man!
Tiggrmommi chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Another fantabulous story Angel! Incredible! Thank you so much for sharing it! Always looking forward to your stuff!
Unchanged Affections chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
GREAT STORY! I'm glad Edward could figure all this out and put his guilt in the past. But at the same time, it seemed like it happened very quickly. I know it was a long time coming, and I also know this was only meant to be a 3 chapter story. So, with the 3 chapters you had to work with... AMAZING!

I think it's interesting that couple found E & B... I know they said they had heard of them. It's almost like E & B are famous, hehe ) Also, not sure if I said this in my review of chapter one, but I really like the way Bella was changed. I know some authors have alluded to a change being able to occur in this way, but I've never read it happening. Very creative!
beccasmind chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Very good!
Frakking Toasters chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I loved it - well done. I was so happy reading this chapter, seeing Edward finally come to his senses. Thanks for writing.

VampGirl
readingmama chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I liked this story. I'm glad that Edward finally let it go.
katmom chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
This was YUMMY! A wonderful spin on the "What ifs"...

And you stretched beautifully!

Send my thanks to Wolves&vamps too!

And thank YOU for sharing...

Kathie
blahblahblah246 chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Animal sex. Rawr. Pounce. Trees.

But not porntastic. Thank you.

Also, I loved how you had Edward come to terms with it all. It wasn't a quick switch from Emoward to acceptance. It took a little guidance (thanks Esme) and some serious consideration.

Destiny. Fate. Loved it.

One more...

Rawr
Pastiche Pen chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Twaz lovely, anna. Just lovely.
dlhk chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
It makes me sad that Edward is so upset and so sad about this whole thing. I thought they were happy. I thought that he would have WANTED her to be a vampire... even though he didn't want it initially, he obviously knows that it is the only way he could ever be with her. Especially since she changed the way she did. There would be no way to have stopped it or to have known to prevent it. yes... of course condoms, but that isn't my point. I would never have used condoms if I thought I couldn't get pregnant and I knew he was safe. it never would have occurred to me for them to use condoms, so this was totally not preventable, and I wish Edward could see it. Plus... it wasn't like this happened without Bella wanting it to. She wanted to change. They were planning on it happening. To me... this was just a more humane way to make it happen. sigh. poor Edward. i like where this is going and I can't wait to see what you do w/ it. -MoB
dlhk chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
GAH! Edward and his guilt. I need for him to get over it. I"m excited to see where you are taking this. I love that her change happened the way it did. How can he think that she didn't choose that? She TOTALLY DID! I can't wait for more. -mommyofboth
ickaren chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
I love the idea of the young couple who come for advice from Bella and Edward. But I am sad that Edward is still suffering so much guilt and regret. He is brooding and always takes too much responsibility onto himself, but it really is time to get over it!

Looking forward to the next chapter...
deelovely60 chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
You beautifully capture Edward's pain and torment in changing Bella, while not alienating him from our affections. I love your work. And the premise that the change happened during their love making is inspired. Thanks to you, and your nagging friends, for sharing your stories with us.
designation452 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
WOW!

really totally DIFFERENT but i likey a lotey! so keep the chapters rolling! hahahahaha can't wait to hear all about what happens next!

xx
designation452 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
oh my gosh! whoa! new intake and out take as to what happen WH

OA!

i hope you cary this on...
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