|Reviews for Imperfect Contrition|
| Stoney Angel chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Fantastic first chapter. Can't wait to read more and more and more. I love how Bella was changed - makes SO MUCH more sense to me.
| missCHELS chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
You've got my attention :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Thanks Wolves&Vamps for sharing.
EZ, are you sure you can do this plot justice with only 3 parts? :)
I'm beginning to hate that word 'ANGST'.
| OliviaJane chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Yay, Edward actually stepped out of his comfort zone and became a doctor. Love Bella's current penname. :)
| greenyellow chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
hm, that was interesting. i'm anxious to see where it goes from here. it is a variance for you, but it's good.
| HopeStreet chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
It's interesting how the one wrong thing mars the rest. This is a well-written story.
| saraamin chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
oh god didnt like that last line not at all oh god Edward being like that its so true so real so not good wanted to sob while reading that line wanted to shake my head oh love this story gives me goose bumps and damn what a good story you are sharing with us : )
Thank you for writing and sharing, hope you will update soon : ) almost as good as COH :P
| london spam chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I like this take so far and am interested in where it goes. How has their fairytale life not worked out? Can the fix it now?
There are so many places this can go and I'm very intrigued to see where you take it.
| gracethegal chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
this looks like it will be really good, i loved the first chapter!
| tiffanyc chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Awesome Story! I loved the way she was changed and how things progressed without angst. I guess to me it flowed naturally this way..
| ilsuocantante chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
i'm intrigued by the changes in canon and the direction it's taking. i can only imagine the guilt and self-loathing edward would harbor over his "recklessness". can't wait to see where this is going!
| ja6108 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Cool... this is an interesting way to look at Bella's change. I always wondered why it couldn't have happened this way. I look forward to reading more.
| ohlneeme chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
keep it up. with BD's bad rap, there are not enough AU BD or alternate endings-
i love CoH and i am very much looking forward to this one continuing.
| Cowgirlgraphics chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
THIS is how BD should have been. I'm just saying ...
| eibbil chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
It's an interesting start and I'm very curious to see where you're going with this one. Nice to see that even years later, Edward's still got a well developed sense of personal guilt.
I do like the spin on Bella's transformation, too.
Anxiously awaiting the next installment.