Reviews for Imperfect Contrition
dlhk chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Awesome! I loved that Edward was able to work it out and allow himself to be whole and happy. Fabulous... And some HOT sexin'. Great story. I'm excited to read your original work and, of course, I can't freaking WAIT for more COH! -mommyofboth
Gasaway Alley chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
All done? I loved it! You so rocked this story and am glad to have gotten to read it! I look forward to reading some more of your talented typing over on COH! Thank you GA
Mizra chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
An interesting break from COH, but light nonetheless. I'm sure the bidder of this story loves it like we do! :)
chrom chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
thanks very much :-)your chapter was all i needed after doing some s...t paper work at late night/early morning...

And it's true - it's so good, when we finally can leave our past behind - lucky Edward and Bella ;-)
MrsFreiden8 chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
beautiful.
Viola Cornuta chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
so nice Edward listened to his mother-sign of a smart man!
Tiggrmommi chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Another fantabulous story Angel! Incredible! Thank you so much for sharing it! Always looking forward to your stuff!
Unchanged Affections chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
GREAT STORY! I'm glad Edward could figure all this out and put his guilt in the past. But at the same time, it seemed like it happened very quickly. I know it was a long time coming, and I also know this was only meant to be a 3 chapter story. So, with the 3 chapters you had to work with... AMAZING!

I think it's interesting that couple found E & B... I know they said they had heard of them. It's almost like E & B are famous, hehe ) Also, not sure if I said this in my review of chapter one, but I really like the way Bella was changed. I know some authors have alluded to a change being able to occur in this way, but I've never read it happening. Very creative!
beccasmind chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Very good!
Frakking Toasters chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I loved it - well done. I was so happy reading this chapter, seeing Edward finally come to his senses. Thanks for writing.

VampGirl
readingmama chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I liked this story. I'm glad that Edward finally let it go.
katmom chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
This was YUMMY! A wonderful spin on the "What ifs"...

And you stretched beautifully!

Send my thanks to Wolves&vamps too!

And thank YOU for sharing...

Kathie
blahblahblah246 chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Animal sex. Rawr. Pounce. Trees.

But not porntastic. Thank you.

Also, I loved how you had Edward come to terms with it all. It wasn't a quick switch from Emoward to acceptance. It took a little guidance (thanks Esme) and some serious consideration.

Destiny. Fate. Loved it.

One more...

Rawr
Pastiche Pen chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Twaz lovely, anna. Just lovely.
dlhk chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
It makes me sad that Edward is so upset and so sad about this whole thing. I thought they were happy. I thought that he would have WANTED her to be a vampire... even though he didn't want it initially, he obviously knows that it is the only way he could ever be with her. Especially since she changed the way she did. There would be no way to have stopped it or to have known to prevent it. yes... of course condoms, but that isn't my point. I would never have used condoms if I thought I couldn't get pregnant and I knew he was safe. it never would have occurred to me for them to use condoms, so this was totally not preventable, and I wish Edward could see it. Plus... it wasn't like this happened without Bella wanting it to. She wanted to change. They were planning on it happening. To me... this was just a more humane way to make it happen. sigh. poor Edward. i like where this is going and I can't wait to see what you do w/ it. -MoB
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