These are just fantastic!

These are great!

I really liked this. Thanks for posting it.

I've never actually read something that is laid out like this. Usually I go for the super long, multi-chaptered reads, but this is so fun to read. It's like getting to see little snippets of their relationship all shuffled around in time. I love it.

WOW. Just... wow. My hat comes off :D

WOW.

WOW!

This is both inspiring and moving.

In keeping with the spirit of the exercise, I'm paring my praise down to a single word: Lovely!

That was sooo COOL.

i think that no 1-suffocation would be a great full length story. keep it up

I absolutely loved this piece of writing! It's late but...thank you!

You are an absolutely amazing writer. On almost every one of these lines I was overcome with the need to read the fic that they were pulled out of (if only! .) and now I'm going to go see what else you've written!

This is absolutely beautiful.

Without question one of the most excellent, beautiful pieces I have ever read. Great concept, as well. I could read these forever; I regret that the story has been discontinued. This went instantly on my "favorites" list, despite the fact that months later I am finally getting the opportunity to review (for that I apologize). I do not often get this enthusiastic about a story; very well done.

These were my two favs:

"It wasn't like he suddenly became Romeo, spouting sonnets and throwing rose petals everywhere, but when they were alone together in their quarters, Nyota understood Juliet."

"Everything connected to Vulcans was hot, she realized, from their planet to their bodies to their love."

Before they fell asleep, Nyota whispered into the darkness, "There's nothing like you anywhere in the universe…and you're here with me..."

I LOVE this line. It's so perfect for them.