Reviews for Epitome of Sin
kickassdani chapter 1 . 2/11
nosebleed worthy!
OoO chapter 1 . 1/17
OMG that was so ... Enticing (smirk).
97kingdomwolf chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
poor allen -chun
SorensonShinigami chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
O.M.G. Holy FUCK! That was awesome. :D I love this!
Jazebeth chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
that's one hell of a way to kill someone...
wolfyhound chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
I will say only this about you're story ... daaaaaaammmmnnnn, awesome!
May-Mei chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Hehehehehe Dark minds think alike, I see. That whole episode I was like "This could turn into Rape real quick..."
Uchiha Riddle chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
I'm glad that I'm not the only one who thought this was how that episode should have went, it was just too obvious that version was a cover up! Kufufu...ahh...this was beautifully written, I hope to see more in the future. Ciaossu!
Mikitsu Kisa-chan chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
That was incredibly sexy. I love stories like these but I really think I should stop because sometimes... I feel like I'm turning into a sadist. /
That is not good. Not good at all. For now however, I will indulge in these kinds of stories and I assure you, I enjoy them. This is the perfect Poker Pair one-shot I've been looking for, I think. Many others that I read were PWP(porn without plot) and it just made me mad at the blatant idiotic ness of it. Not like this but sort of like... The kind that makes the Uke seem overly submissive, overly loud(moaning, screaming, etc) and more like its child rape then an actual adult.

I just made a rant... Sorry you had to listen to that

Thank you so much for writing and I look forward to your future stories! Hopefully.
Shirubagure chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Poker pair! yay! Just gotta love the poker pair.
PinkSugarDust chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I felt kinda bad laughing at the part where Tyki took Allen's innocence, cause he literally did.. nice pun. xDD Anyways, awesome story! :D
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
such an awesome story
Seraphim210 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I loved this to death.
blair hatsune chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
tyki you are an real ass but we love you!
ME chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Sorry Tyki... Allen isnt dead yet... He's been through worse, so dont think you've broken him yet

Anywho, awesome fic! I love it! I really hope you would make a sequel of some sorts. Something where Tyki meets Allen again and is surprised that he isnt 'dead' so to speak. Then again, if you intended for this solely to be a one-shot, thats fine. But you really have an awesome fic :D
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