Reviews for Bedtime Stories |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow I missed this update! Loved it! and I'd love to hear Emmetts reaction to it...Im sure he was excited...and probably a little hungry afterwards! Keep the great writing coming! ~Tiffany |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is really good. Love this chapter - the Bella/Edward moment at the end was really good - I wasn't really expecting it in story like this, and surpises are good. Beauty and the beast might work well...Nessie/Jake. Keep updating! MissMazz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed what I have read so far, I think the way you have put a vampiric twist on age-old fairytales is very clever, and I hope that you continue adding chapters! MissMazz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol that's really good I'm going to read the next chapters right now. You can't stop me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! That was really sweet Justine! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Renesmee chies in with her responses...they seem to typical...for a hybrid anyway..lol Looking forward to another one! ~Tiffany |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuteness! (: Very clever, loved it. Rach xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my Carlisle, this story is so good! I pretty enjoyed the modified Little Red Riding Hood. Hmm... would we make it into our school play? Hopefully, since there are many other hardcore Twilighters in my class. PAMS (Post Again More Soon), Justine! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again then story this story is ten times better than the original. I cant wait for the next one! Keep up the good work and update soon or ill give you a papercut in front of jasper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha ha, this is really funny! :D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that'll probably be Emmett's favorite story! I like the ending, it shows that Edward and Bella can take the simplest moments and still desire each other above all else. Fabulous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must admit I enjoyed the distractions there! I can really imagine them having a moment and then Nessie distracting them... haha This was by far my favourite of Edward's stories, the part about the blood was so funny! I also agree with Reneesme that Emmett will enjoy this fic! :) I really can't wait for more stories from our Eddie! :) Keep up the fantastic work! With love JLF xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the dialogue between Bella and Edward at the beginning and how Nessie was allowed to interupt but Bella is not haha... Very sweet again... I wish there was more of this type of fic on the web! :) Love JLF xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I certainly think Edward makes a splendid storyteller... I was entranced! haha! Aw this was so cute, Reneesme is a little darling! XD The bit at the end worked well when they were discussing her options... I also ADORED the comment about Jacob... as much as he annoys me! And also the Disney comment made me laugh as much as I love Disney... I also, don't see Edward as much of a Disney fan! hehe Onto the next chappie! Love JLF xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's how all fairy tales should end...lol. This one really did seem like a true fairy tale, dark and someone is gonna die. Thanks for sharing! |