Reviews for Bedtime Stories |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the name 'Scarlett' cause it's another shade of red! Perfect! Edward's last line had me cracking up 'Bella, it's just a story.' Pretty sure that's what Jake said to her after telling her about the cold ones! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was cute! What story are you doing next? x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I relly enjoyed this! I'm loving your retold fairytales. Maybe you can try a rendition of Hansel and Gretel ar 3 Billy Goats Gruff? Keep up your excellent writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great retelling of little red riding hood. Now if only I could get Edward to come and tell them to me. I loved the last line in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I love this Version of little Red Ridding hood! It was something new, so different! This is awesome, I can't wait for your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute, I like the twists in the classics! ~Tiffany |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks again for a cute bedtime story for Reneesme. I liked it a lot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this is lovely. It's so nice seeing Edward as the daddy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() daddy and daughter time is absolutely adoreable...I loved this story. Edward would always be the ideal daddy in my eyes :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was cute! You should do a Rapunzel version of it! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! This was such a cute story Justine! Can't wait to see what other fairy stories you come up with... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it .it was even better than the orignal cinderella,you really know how to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! :) I love the concept too, such a great idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it.. I love Daddy Edward stories too! And you never disappoint. :) Edward making up stories for Nessie? Definitely. I loved Edward showing his exasperation with Bella.. even if it was only "mock indignation" xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Edward's version is well better! Vampires always improve a story ;) xx |