Reviews for Bedtime Stories
Keira Eve MacDonnell chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
I love the name 'Scarlett' cause it's another shade of red! Perfect! Edward's last line had me cracking up 'Bella, it's just a story.' Pretty sure that's what Jake said to her after telling her about the cold ones! lol
DELEEEEETE chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
Aww that was cute! What story are you doing next? x
sihaya9 chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
I relly enjoyed this! I'm loving your retold fairytales. Maybe you can try a rendition of Hansel and Gretel ar 3 Billy Goats Gruff?

Keep up your excellent writing!
thamker chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
That was a great retelling of little red riding hood. Now if only I could get Edward to come and tell them to me. I loved the last line in the story.
swishandflickwit chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
Oh! I love this Version of little Red Ridding hood! It was something new, so different! This is awesome, I can't wait for your next update!
patch138 chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
very cute, I like the twists in the classics!

~Tiffany
CatMasters chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
thanks again for a cute bedtime story for Reneesme. I liked it a lot :)
Naymee chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Aw, this is lovely. It's so nice seeing Edward as the daddy.
Absolutely Cullen chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
daddy and daughter time is absolutely adoreable...I loved this story. Edward would always be the ideal daddy in my eyes :)
DELEEEEETE chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Aww that was cute! You should do a Rapunzel version of it! xx
smudger1 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Ah! This was such a cute story Justine! Can't wait to see what other fairy stories you come up with...
countrygirl1493 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
i loved it .it was even better than the orignal cinderella,you really know how to write.
HopelesslyTwilightAddicted chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
I like it! :) I love the concept too, such a great idea.
CC620 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
loved it.. I love Daddy Edward stories too! And you never disappoint. :) Edward making up stories for Nessie? Definitely.

I loved Edward showing his exasperation with Bella.. even if it was only "mock indignation" xD
YourLittleDecoy chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Aw

Edward's version is well better! Vampires always improve a story ;) xx
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