Reviews for Bedtime Stories |
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![]() ![]() hahaha Fantastic! I loved every word of it! As always, hats off to you, one fantastic writer! I loved the twists in the story, I wonder what Edward would make of Little Red Riding Hood, maybe using Jacob as the lead role. haha :) Perfect! 5*'s |
![]() ![]() ![]() but the "young man" who sits next to her, that's jacob isn't it? or was that just renesmee's opinion of who it should be, or...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I think he should customize Beauty and the Beast next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good and I really want to read more! SO UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Rob Pattinson for being so beautiful it hurts to look at him." Haha, I would like the source. xD Oh! Tell me what story he does next! And I really liked it! Although, like Edward, I didn't like the fact Nessie imagined Jacob as the prince. Hahaha. I was so picturing Edward! Haha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw so sweet! Poor Edward couldn't tell the story uninterupted haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw this is so cute and fluffy - I love ready your post BD Fluff. It makes me happy to see the story carry on after the books ) o and it's going to be multi chapter? D I love the idea! Good Luck! -Jan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story and the twist on Cinderella. I especially liked what Stella wanted before they got married. To see the wonderful flock of ducks. I look forward to the other stories you are going to do. My mom always invented bedtime stories for me too. She would make them up about whatever and whoever we wanted so they were always unique. I wish I had recorded them know, as she never told the same story twice and now her memory of anything is fading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the wonderful story! It was so much fun seeing Edward transforming the story for Nessie... :D Please write some more! I have a lot of fun reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute! I love fics that describe them being a family... like this one...So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Edward. Who could resist a bed time story from him? Very cute! I love the banner for Sunshine State! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet story. I love Edward/Renesmee fluff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW how cute! :D plz update son XD LOVE IT :D ~*~Sara~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Thank you so much for the dedication too! Daddy Edward is definitely my cup of tea:) “Like Mommy!” “Well, I think so.” So cute! I can just imagine Edward's face as he agrees, and Bella rolls her eyes:) “Bella, do you mind?” he said in mock indignation. “I’m trying to weave a spell of enchantment here.” Haha! For some reason, I can only picture Rob saying this in his wonderful accent, yet he's Daddy Edward, just the same:D Curious;) “Because she didn’t have Auntie Alice,” Renesmee said with satisfaction. "Renesmee patted my cheek and shared a picture of…..Jacob." “There are a lot of aspects of the traditional version that never worked for me,” he grinned. “And let’s not even talk about the Disney movie.” Priceless! This was really great; I loved all the little moments, and Edward's version of a classic fairytale just sounds so much better! ebhg:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's a comment... What sort of a prosaic name is Stella? LOL I thought that was very funny. Are we going to get Sleeping Beauty- the only vampire who slept? And Snow White who was... the only other vampire who slept? She's certainly pale enough. Actually, can the generic Prince Charming be the vampire at least once? And then Renesmee would be constantly making comparisons to Bella and Edward, and... oh. Can someone overhear? Like Emmett? Emmett overhearing and making comments would be funny. *Grins* I'm getting into this a little too much. Never mind. It's fun! TSG |