so cute x love ness

great!

I started my workday reading this story and it has done more than a doughnut to lift my mood. A lovely little slice of everyday life with these people that I love so much. I especially liked the description of Edward looking "rueful" after Nessie shows him Jacob in her mind. It perfectly describes how I think Edward would look & it's that "trueness" to the character that makes the story so satisfying.

Thank you.

I loved this! :) It was the first Daddy Edward story I've read, and I think I'll need to read more if they're all as good as this one! Very sweet, and a great characterization of Edward (and Bella and Renesmee, I'm just biased in favour of Edward lol) Well done:)

Very neat twist on Cinderella story! I love Bella's interuptions, and who comes to mind for Nessie's handsome man and fairy godmother!

I usually don't like Renesmee stories but I love your Daddy Edward stories. Thanks!

That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Edward's twist and Bella and Nessie's comments. Then how Nessie reletes to Edward and Bella's situation. I enjoy your writing.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I think this is the 4th time I read it, and it makes me grin like a goon every time. I love how you're tweaking really simple elements of the fairy tale, but it works so well in the Twilight world. And who doesn't love Dadward?

As always, marvelous job, Justine!

You know, I've never thought of using ducks as a bargaining condition when it comes to marriage proposals. Should someone ever pop the question to me, I'll have to keep it in mind!