Reviews for Sinspiration |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sorta knew this was gonna happen, getting signed I mean. Sadly I have to finish this tomorrow, its already 2am and I should be sleeping :P You rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woo! sexy times again! total flufftasticness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a rebel! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wooooo! sexy stuff going on here :D I love this fic soooooo much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well played Trent! You so got her :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() another awesome chapter, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snaps you go Trent! I was wondering when Tom would make an appearance again :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the Daria Trent moments, I love these kinds of stories that don't have them confessing their undying love. woo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been reading this on my phone for the past few hours and now I'm back on my laptop. I REALLY love this story! It's so foxy! :D well played! I'll try to review each chapter after this, they might be short as I really want to finish it! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was such a lovely chapter! I found myself squealing at the end and grinning like an idiot. The best bit about it is that you still managed to have the fluff while they remained perfectly in character. It was done really well. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I've gone like 17 chapters without reviewing! I just got too absorbed in the story! Anyway, nice twist! Did not see that coming. Gotta love Jane. As always, they're perfectly in character and you feel the awkwardness of the conversations between Trent and Daria. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this! Your dialogue is spot-on; I can imagine the characters' voices saying every word. As for the recommendations (if you're still working on this), the scene with Daria/Trent at the party and Tom looking on in the background would be nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. The awkwardness was portrayed quite accurately in the earlier chapters and the "fluffy" moments seemed true to the characters, without seeming too "fluffy". Great job! |