Reviews for Not what it seems
SweetieLove chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
It's filled with mystique although some of the sequencing parts were a bit flashback needs a little more clarification in my opinion but I can say that's it's good.

teacupz chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
it is nice to see another fic about Vesta... and it does tell about her family and thoughts of them... :3

maybe, the genre should be family/general or family/mystery? or not? O.o
sugarapplesweet chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I love the thought of Vesta strutting her stuff in the cities without any of her neighbors being the wiser. When reading it, I couldn't help thinking... 'She's a brick house~ She's just letting it all hang out!" XD

Very fun read and good luck in the contest!

~ Peace and Love
high improbability chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Nice work for a first story! I saw no mistakes, other than the fact that Marlin is Vesta's little brother, because she mentioned she had no living relatives going back two generations...unless he's.../gulp/ DEAD? D

But that's just me.

Other than that, it was very original! Good luck in the contest!
Icefire149 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
i loved this story! that was a very interesting take on Vesta. keep writing! good luck in the contest :D
Jean Cooper chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Very interesting take on Vesta. Original for sure. I'm curious as to what she does with her expensive items when back in the valley. Good luck in the contest!