|Reviews for Kitsune on Campus|
| Mookeypoop chapter 4 . 1/25
A-okay start :/
| Heero Twilight chapter 26 . 1/6
seriously you need to continue this.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/2
Naruto is not a legend material. Rikkudo sennin yes.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/2
Why restrict him though. He is already weak and you are making him weaker
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/2
why give him so many restrictions? Without kyuubi and sage mode Naruto is nothing. He can't even beat takamichi.
| catze86 chapter 26 . 12/19/2013
naruto in this fic is a weakling and retard
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 17 . 12/1/2013
umm they lived their lives and all... So doesn't that mean naruto has a descendats?
and if they happen to be interesting peoples...
and who knows, sages/monks/holy priestess could survive for a WHILE and lots of demons!
really hope you do something with Narutos lineage and all.
and Chibi chan gettinger body back and her and Naruto going at it would be nice! I think they have built up a good friendship of sorts and make a fun couple, akward peoples with a lot of emotional shit...
also he was with JIRYIA for two and half years, and jiryias had more missions than anyone. so hes killed ALOT, not (to many hopefully) hate kills, bit still... old experience means you know specifically what NOT to do.
So yeah you got to be that Jiryia made sure to handle that CORRECTLY in a way that wouldent be soul breaking and set him upt hat he CAN handle it and all. and no pauses! so theres that.
smart of Hinata, his people are dead. so any flesha nd blood ones.. well people RELATED to them or something could be fun!
but yeah Naruto baby and it having babies and so on and so forth... and considering child of the Nazamaki lineage and Uzuamki along with priestes (and daddy punching out Biju and WINNING) well he/she probably had some INTRESTING times...
hope you do something iwht htat.
this is fun! thanks.
| Rizaidym chapter 25 . 11/13/2013
I will admit. I honestly believe that Naruto was assaulted once. JUST once. Then the Sandaime came down on whoever did it like the fist of an angry god, and nobody touched him again until Mizuki. Because there is always at least ONE complete idiot in any batch, let alone an enormous city like Konoha. But yeah, I agree that the fandom blows it way out of proportion. Hey, is this story dead or just on hiatus? I ask because this is the story that got me into Negima, so I really want to see it finished.
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/26/2013
heck yea go Eva/Naruto pls finish it
| Partsu chapter 26 . 10/17/2013
Few points I cringed at but otherwise very entertaining so far!
| NeroYagyuu chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
Man...this seems like a great fan fiction...and I would love to review every chapter...yet sadly you don't write anymore...at least not here. Soooo...I digress.
| BruddaJokka chapter 26 . 10/10/2013
Sad that this seems to have been abandoned. It's really quite enjoyable.
| WhoCares chapter 26 . 10/1/2013
On the Naruto abuse thing, I'm not reading the reviews so I don't know if anyone has said this yet. My point is that even if there isn't any physical abuse, there is still the mental aspect. First and most obvious to me, Dark Naruto from Shippuden. Yes children fight and bully each other, but this does not cause a child to form completely opposing personality fragments. Second, Naruto's Precious People. In his list of people he would give his life for, he lists Zabuza, Haku, and the pair from the ramen stand. If your listing the workers at your favorite restaurant as some of your closest family (and I have only heard of them treating him as a favored customer in return) then you obviously aren't well liked. For Haku, I can see it because he taught a good life lesson and was Naruto's first real connection to someone like himself (given purpose by others), however as he also cares about Zabuza (less than the others yes, but still in it) whom tried to kill him multiple times, dishonored Naruto's friend (Haku), and insulted his dream and abilities to his face, then Naruto really needs to update his definition of a friendly person. There is implied neglect in how Naruto has his own house even before he graduates and is considered an adult (until which he should still be in an orphanage but isn't), and in how Naruto is oblivious to the social norms growing up and watching others should have taught him (even if no one taught them to him he should have picked up a few). This ignorance shows he formed a sort of shell around his mind to keep himself happy and relatively sane, as all humans would. However, these are mainly plot devices that shaped Naruto or were used to move along/provide the plot, and I'm sure many could refute all I have said. There is evidence both ways. Then again, this is fan fiction, so cannon doesn't really matter. Write whatever you wish, your good at it.
| Biblio388 chapter 26 . 8/17/2013
Awesome spin this chapter. Really hope to be able to see all that Naruto has promised to in the past few chapters come to fruition. The direction that the story is taking is pleasant to read through and also offers a nice bit of food for thought.
| Biblio388 chapter 23 . 8/17/2013
Loved the chapter. It was interesting how it played out and the way that the goal was achieved in each case.