Reviews for Kitsune on Campus
Blackvial chapter 26 . 8/20/2014
please update this story
hye1995 chapter 26 . 8/7/2014
This is an amazing story, although i haven't seen or read Negima. Keep up the work and please update it. It's cruel to just abandon a good story like that, without giving reasons
bored.com chapter 12 . 5/31/2014
Boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring. This story is very cringe-worthy.
sabrewolf03 chapter 26 . 5/18/2014
and he was never heard from again.
Wizco chapter 26 . 5/17/2014
Should you decide to continue this, have Naruto become aware of what happened under the influence of the tree and Asuna's command. It was funny at first, but now it's just getting irritating that he doesn't know. And the way Asuna keeps attacking him even though she screwed him over really makes me hate her more and more.

Cheers,
Wizco
Wizco chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
It's been ages since you've written this, but if you ever decide to go through it again you should really look out for the following two problems:
* You (like many others) write 'defiantly' when meaning 'definitely'. These are two entirely different words.
* You write 'must of', 'could of', etc. when meaning 'must have', 'could have', etc. When speaking people tend to use "must've", which of course sounds like 'must of', but isn't.

Cheers,
Wizco
uscias chapter 26 . 5/12/2014
Please update soon.
Btralox chapter 26 . 4/21/2014
Oh...I reached the end. I was marathoning this and the most recent chapter caught be by surprise. Well I have enjoyed this and I look forward to more.
Mookeypoop chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
A-okay start :/
Heero Twilight chapter 26 . 1/6/2014
seriously you need to continue this.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/2/2014
Naruto is not a legend material. Rikkudo sennin yes.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/2/2014
Why restrict him though. He is already weak and you are making him weaker
Guest chapter 7 . 1/2/2014
why give him so many restrictions? Without kyuubi and sage mode Naruto is nothing. He can't even beat takamichi.
catze86 chapter 26 . 12/19/2013
naruto in this fic is a weakling and retard
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 17 . 12/1/2013
umm they lived their lives and all... So doesn't that mean naruto has a descendats?
and if they happen to be interesting peoples...
and who knows, sages/monks/holy priestess could survive for a WHILE and lots of demons!
really hope you do something with Narutos lineage and all.
and Chibi chan gettinger body back and her and Naruto going at it would be nice! I think they have built up a good friendship of sorts and make a fun couple, akward peoples with a lot of emotional shit...
also he was with JIRYIA for two and half years, and jiryias had more missions than anyone. so hes killed ALOT, not (to many hopefully) hate kills, bit still... old experience means you know specifically what NOT to do.

So yeah you got to be that Jiryia made sure to handle that CORRECTLY in a way that wouldent be soul breaking and set him upt hat he CAN handle it and all. and no pauses! so theres that.
smart of Hinata, his people are dead. so any flesha nd blood ones.. well people RELATED to them or something could be fun!
but yeah Naruto baby and it having babies and so on and so forth... and considering child of the Nazamaki lineage and Uzuamki along with priestes (and daddy punching out Biju and WINNING) well he/she probably had some INTRESTING times...
hope you do something iwht htat.
this is fun! thanks.
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