Reviews for Kitsune on Campus
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 10/31/2015
Dropped. I'm not even willing to give such a forced story a try. How convenient for you that he would fall asleep and wake up in the school. That the headmaster would know where he came from, his name, the legend from thousands of years ago, then ask him to join the school. IT'S JUST SO FREAKEN CONVENIENT!...
lava213 chapter 26 . 9/12/2015
I'm probably guessing you stopped writing stories since you haven't updated since 2011 but if you are update soon man
Dkadarkness chapter 26 . 8/4/2015
Abandobed this good story...
nope perfect chapter 6 . 7/17/2015
if they are reading this they better damn well know how the story went, its better to condense them and stick to your own creative mindset, so long as you include the really improtant matters and dont change their personalities too much you're doing great.
made him awesome chapter 5 . 7/17/2015
i like how you managed to make him look like an Innocent child, an immature idiot trickster, and a total genius all in one chapter. ( in short, you made him look like Naruto) damn well done man, seriously.
PredatorPuck chapter 6 . 7/5/2015
sent eva to her room hahahahaha! i'm crying!
PredatorPuck chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
hahah was hilarious!
Axcel chapter 20 . 6/8/2015
Naruto's attacker even said "considering the direction you were headed in" which should have made it obvious he didn't have the bok as Mahora is behind him.
Axcel chapter 15 . 6/7/2015
Eva and Naruto are made for each other.
Axcel chapter 13 . 6/7/2015
Look on the bright side, in a day or so of recovery, Naruto could match Eva. In two days, he could crush her. In seven days, she'll be a speck of dust compared to him. On the other hand, this doesn't help if she kills everyone in the first few minutes...
Axcel chapter 12 . 6/7/2015
Naruto in the manga is shown to know several potent jutsu from everything but lightning. Hell, one of his strongest combos is combining toad-oil, wind, and him using a fire jutsu.
Axcel chapter 11 . 6/7/2015
Sucks for Fate that Naruto's mere killing intent could crush his mind, let alone when tapping into Kurama's. It is amusing that he things he is some top-dog compared to Naruto. Naruto won't need to fight, just kill him ninja-style.
Axcel chapter 4 . 6/6/2015
Argh! Another author gimping Naruto with a plot device instead of just enjoying hbis badass overpoweredness! Good fic, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
Ok, is this story inspired by black dragon's Big Human on Campus?
Guest chapter 26 . 3/28/2015
Good stuff please come back
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