Reviews for Burning Pit
theywontletmedeletethisaccount chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
i like O'Neil/Cater pairing :)
Alkcalien chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
That is so sad - but the story is well written. ::sigh::
theicemenace chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
sniff, sniff Mascara alert!
Rac80 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
this gets an "aw" and *sniff* beautifully done.
J.Stone chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Wow! That sucked.
tone death chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Aw poor Cam.
chrysalis escapist chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
That was very interesting how she seemed to be the cause of the fire but at the same time can give him comfort, through the sadness expressed in her eyes, love tends to be a very tricky feeling and I think youd did a great job in capturing that. I loved the description of her eyes!