|Reviews for The Untouchable Element|
| azwildcats chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
I don't why I started reading this knowing it's been years since it was updated. Sadly, that seems to be the norm with Rosalie/Bella fics :( It's a shame because a lot of them including yours are awesome. Do you think you'll ever pick back up on writing this one again?
| korina7sports chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
when are you gonna update this story?
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 11 . 11/7/2013
Fuck that! Imprints can be rejected in my opinion and or can remain platonic. Personally I'd become a vampire and screw Rosalie's brains out. Fuck what Leah has to say I don't like pushy people who think they are the cure for something 'wrong'. Guys who think they can cure lesbianism or girl werewolves who think they can cure a girl in love with a vampire.
| caesaraugusta chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
Do you plan to update it and continue it?
| Ms.Birdde chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
No emmett.. mmmm
| JuliaK19 chapter 11 . 6/14/2013
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| Guest chapter 11 . 5/6/2013
I was enjoying this story until the leah crap started. glad you stopped writing it because it was going down hill fast. Total disrespect slash borderline rape that leah did.
| reptarjr chapter 11 . 4/11/2013
You really should pick back up on this story. I love the drama going on. And as much as I like Rosalie I can't help but root for Leah and hope that Bella finally accepts her. Why'd you stop writing?
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/18/2013
I didn't finish reading all of this, as the scene between Rosalie and Bella in her bedroom was pretty much a rape scene. Not a very good way to start their physical relationship...and when Rosalie used those vulgar words against Bella and forced her hand inside of Bella, despite her protests...no. Not good at all.
| duralast406 chapter 11 . 3/9/2013
Why didn't you finish?! I wish you would have continued this to the end :( please come back and update
| Ladybug chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Hey thanks for sharing your creativity I really like your plot. Just one thing though ( I'm not hating or anything just want you to improve? Please don't take it the wrong way.), its really annoying that their monologue is archaic English. It has British feel to it- I mean I can understand the Cullens speaking like that but the rest of the character? No, just no. They sound like non-English speaking characters trying to show off their grammatical skills. It's weird IMO. But I really like this story nonetheless. Good work!
| vamp1001 chapter 11 . 11/4/2012
Love the story really good keep up the good work with thr story
| jessie901121 chapter 10 . 10/18/2012
what the hell. leah is such a psycho bitch. she basically just forcing herself on , u bitch . bella is belong to rosalie ...
| SwiftlyFallen4Romance chapter 11 . 7/12/2012
OMG! Love it, eagerly but not so patiently waiting for an update. I'm just about as captivated by this story as Rosalie is with Bella, that's pretty intense if I do say so myself.
| mia chapter 11 . 5/27/2012
My fav story for bella an rose please update sooon and ill give you a hundred virtual cookies:D