Reviews for Missed Chances
sammie28 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
The funeral scene was fantastic - and I LOVED the Encyclopedia Brown books, so the shout-out alone was worth the price of admission!
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Boy, you had me scared in the beginning there! Thank God for nightmares, huh? Sweet ending...I love the image of a mussy, sleepy Marshall in his airplane jammies. *sigh!*
thisentireaccountembarrassesme chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I hated it. Then I liked it.

I cried. Then I burst out laughing.

I was going to stop reading, then I kept reading.

I absolutely loved it! It was so sad at the beginning, I cried. Then, when Mary said, "You were dead." I burst into laughter.

It's really good!
thevampyr chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
The first half is only good if the second half is longer. Its not bad but it's not quite good yet.
bridgie797 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
THAT WAS SPECTACULAR! I love it! Thanks so much for posting it! Awesome story!
iconoclasticone chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
bravo! i probably should've read the two-shot after I read this one, must always remember weepy BEFORE funny! But, very well done on both of them. This one was so beautiful in its succinctness, and it was funny as well as moving. And, the other one was adorably playful, reminds me of a similar scene from NCIS, my other favorite show. Great job again, Melissa
Caia chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
You nearly killed ME!