I love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married & I’m happy that Bella & Edward have a Beautiful daughter

Had I been Bella, Edward would’ve been kicked out of the house and would’ve needed to grovel for days before he could come back. Hell, if I didn’t believe in not hitting other people unless I’m self-defense, I would’ve kicked him in the balls before throwing him out on his ass. It would’ve taken me a very long time to get over him.

Yeah, being apart can suck. I came back from deployment only a few months before my wedding, and shortly after, it was my husband’s turn to go out. But it got easier over time, even with kids in the mix. Lean on friends and family, keep yourself busy, and don’t start counting the days until you’re much closer to the end. (Unless you have kids who like to do those countdown activities.) It’s tough, but it does end eventually.

Are you joking? Edward tells Bella he was going to cheat on her, and it takes her all of three seconds to forgive him after she gives him some weak ass warning of “don’t you do that again!” This story infuriates me. Bella is so weak. Edward is so dumb. I’m done. Can’t read anymore.

Even though I loved the premise of the story and you’re a great writer, I really struggled with a lot of this. They make some terrible decisions throughout and rush in to everything. Bella’s character was disappointing as she just comes across as being pretty pathetic, I can’t think of a single time she stood her ground or called someone out for treating her so poorly. It’s like her life was just something that happened to her, she had no control which was sad.

Tf again? Bella's forgiving Him that easily? I'm out.

Tf?

That was a little unrealistic. The reporters in front of you can’t make deals for all reporters or paparazzi everywhere. To actually make deals for the future is even more ridiculous.

That was just ridiculous. Just ridiculous. I don’t know how to even put into words what I think of Edward leaving. Even worse is the fact that his parents had no problem asking him and find nothing wrong with him leaving his new girlfriend for six months. Besides the fact that you discuss things with a partner and not tell them what your going to do when a situation concerns them also. Did Edward not learn anything from his parents relationship.

Its against the law to send people a letter telling them to be out in two weeks. It would take months and months to get someone out if they refused to leave.

RE-READING AN ALL TIME FAVORITE!

Great story! Great intro to the sequel.

Sweet!

Pictures of Edward with his baby would be precious for sure!

Great chapter!