I don't understand something here. During the fight Voldy suddenly appears with the prophecy sphere and starts fighting/taunting Harry. When Harry ejects him from his head, all a sudden Voldy is just gone - where did he go to? There's just a blank space where is used to be! Scene breaks would be useful too, and help separate scene changes.

Readers could have used a warning this story is so heavily and aggressively slash. Hermione and Luna can't provide enough cover to serve as beards for Harry and Ron, and you've done nothing to divert attention from Albus and his aged catamite, Snivellus."Who's proposing for the title" of Queen, indeed?

I’m so sick of Hermione and Ron. They are entitled brats, it’s none of their business what Harry and Luna do. And their rune project and the greenhouse is none of their business. Harry is allowed to keep things to himself

Thank you for an original story with a whimsical surprise at the end. I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks for the very awesome and highly entertaining story, with one hell of an epilogue

Thanks for another excellent chapter

Thanks for another excellent and very fun chapter

Thanks for another excellent chapter with a rather funny ending

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter. Also, I don’t feel bad for Draco’s father at all, let him get what’s coming to him.

Thanks for another excellent chapter, and I really liked that ending as well

Another excellent chapter, and a rather amusing ending

Thanks for another great and fun chapter

Love the addition of the Dragon, thanks for another, entertaining chapter

Thanks for another, entertaining chapter with a rather amusing acronym

Thanks for another, very entertaining chapter.