Reviews for RuneMaster
imgonnadie chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
Excellent start to your story. Please do contineu to write.
mwinter1 chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
Seemed a little rushed compared to the first chapter. Slow it down a tad. Great though this chapter more story telling then conversation.
Herne-of-the-lantern chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Great story, any idea who the paring will be?
Cthulu chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Great story mate!

Im curious to see what you will do with the runes, how to actually implement their powers and so forth.

Keep up the good work!
mysteryman2000 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
good fic
Belladonna16 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Me likey.

Want more!
Rebhist chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
salut ! Je viens de terminer le premier chapitre ! J'ai bien aimé, bien j'ai hâte de lire la suite ! Je veux savoir ce qu'il va arriver à Malfoy. J'aime bien aussi le caractère d'Harry, plus sur de lui, qui prend plus initiative. Sachant que l'histoire est toute écrite, où est le prochain chapitre ?
LuckyFelix chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I enjoyed that and am certainly looking forward to the rest of the story (soon, hopefully).

My two major gripes would be the timeline (Hermione walks out around Easter, I believe) & electives start during third year, there would be no second years taking Runes.

Still looking forward to the rest, however.
Memory King chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Time-line is totally out of wac, story would have been better if you'd taken look at the Lexicon before writing it.

But it's still entertaining.
Clotho's Thread chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Hi,

This story has started really well, you have some good character development and the plot is slow but interesting, not rushed into like so many stories are. The only criticism I have is you either need a beta or need a better one, there are many small mistakes that, if fixed, would improve your story a great deal.

Regards
DaemonWolfe chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I've seen Harry as a Runemaster before but never like this! I love it, good work!
GinnyLover14 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Love the story so far! Not many run master fics out there and i love them!

Is this going to be H/L?
ARedHair chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Good beginning.

You've used a few nice small tweaks to move away from Canon

- Harry & Ron leaving Divination with Hermione. Its entirely in character for the boys to support Hermione this way. Besides, Harry had lots of reason to leave and once H&Hr left Ron would follow.

- Harry choosing and having a knack for Runes. This is arbitrary, but reasonable. Harry may goof off with Ron, but its clear in Canon that he can learn when he wants to. His parents were both Head students.

- Harry (1) has a random fit of frustration at the twin's truancy (2) makes a provocative remark (3) is able to follow up in a coherent fashion (4) strikes a cord with the twins. Nothing impossible or even terribly unlikely.

Three small, very reasonable deviations from the books with profound potential. Well done.

Its not the best part of your story, but its always nice to have a story already finished so there won't be long waits for updates.
wadeki chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
i have been reading fanfics for a long time and i can see the start of a great story ...please update again soon and keep up the great storyline.
Sharkbaitx42 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
cool fic. i look forward to reading more.
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