I have to tell you that this is by far my favorite Rin/Sesshoumaru fanfics. Their relationship is complex and passionate and scary and I absolutely love it. Your writing style is incredibly vivid and immersive as well, which makes reading this fic an absolute joy. I've read this fic several times and will continue to reread it because it's just so welll thought out. Bravo!

Ugh at the end where Rin is straight up...EVERYTHING lol I just cant lol I love it so much. This is the kind of energy one aspires to

This is probably my fav rin x sesshomaru fic! I hope you continue writing more stories!

Looove this fic soo much. Binged it so hard lol thank you!

Sooo I just thought I would let you know that I have binge read this like the Dickens. I cant stay away, it cant be healthy! & to think someone wrote this when they were in high school?! BLOWS MINDS.

Why did you name his father differently? I always assumed it was InuTashio ?

Okay I started reading a few hours ago and literally could not move until I finished this. WOW. You are incredibly talented. Thank you for sharing this, writing this, just wow.

*weeps*

Woah. That last scene. Just. Woah.

Bless this

Thank you for putting so much effort in! Your story was the first angst I read and it
set the bar quite high.

Thank you for an entertaining fic and a worthwhile read! It leaves me wanting more SeshRin but not in a bad way. Congrats on finishing such a large fanfic (I’m aware it’s been published/done for quite some time) and I applaud your efforts to go back through and edit everything! Not a lot of people are willing to do that and your intent and efforts are admirable. Thanks again!

“Fowl”-typed, not “foul”. Fowl being birds/avian creatures and a noun and “foul” being an adjective meaning disgusting/bad/gross/evil etc.

Interesting turn of events. I like how it’s written and I’m also unsure about how I feel about all of it. I think I needed more description of the change and how she felt and what she experienced etc. It feels a bit rushed to me and a bit disconnected at points.

For all my critiques,please don’t misunderstand. This is truly a well written story and I wouldn’t be nearly as able to provide such feedback if it weren’t. Your word choice is superb and writing style quite mature, which makes it quite easy to overlook the occasional spelling and grammatical errors that are only to be expected and are mostly minor compared to 95% of the several scores of fics I’ve read on this site.

I think you mean Tetsusaiga/Tessaiga/etc. and not Tensaiga. Tenseiga (with an E) was/is Sesshomaru’s sword before he got Bakusaiga, so Tensaiga is like a mush of the two original names.