Reviews for Their Fated Meeting
haveyounomercy chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
This was really good. I liked how you showed Hiruma's thoughts in a more human form, but were able to avoid sappy-ness and OOC-ness.

For your first Eyeshield 21 FanFiction, this was not bad at all. You captured Hiruma pretty nicely, and didn't over-exaggerate him like so many others do.

The subtle humour you incorporated into the story was good as well.
toya1255 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Wow! So beautiful! Love it. xD
Bar-Ohki chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Hiruma might not call it fate but it certainly left an impression on him.

Nicely done.