Reviews for Naruto: Chronicles of the Seventh: Dissension
Guest chapter 15 . 12/29/2016
sasuke you fool sarkura had fell for you not me you . but it not good for you even the vaillge had need for you not me Naruto but you are a fool for why ravend for you fuck frailmy ,so go kill me you fool . and sarkura he do not love you I do love you .not him .
icemaxprime chapter 9 . 5/26/2016
Dam that's som heavy stuff for kono'
KaiSaeren chapter 4 . 12/16/2015
Very nice so far, tho seems a bit rushed, but as i have another two books to go thru i belive that will get sorted :D
I hope that we will get an answer or a flashback as to why and how he was banished from the village, it seems odd it wasnt adressed so far. Not to mention that Sakura didnt go with him or that she doesnt feel guilty over not coming with him or offering it at least. I find it hard to belive that Naruto would just get up and leave and Sakura wouldnt fight for him staying.
Anyways, looking foward seeing whats next :)
Orange Kage chapter 5 . 12/18/2014
Aha! A legend of Aang reference, very nicely done!
Fox's Den chapter 16 . 3/25/2014
You have Pretty professional style, Interesting story. Going to read Akatsuki/New Dawn.
Zero-Tails317 chapter 16 . 2/15/2014
I enjoyed reading this story:-) Now off to book two:-)
Do The Roar2012 chapter 16 . 2/13/2014
Honestly my heart was stuck in my throat at this one. Just simply brilliant!
Do The Roar2012 chapter 15 . 2/13/2014
Naruto sometimes I wish you would just let Sasuke go and let him get himself killed. I would be very happy about that :D Ah I'm glad Sakura beat Sasuke some more to be honest. Was shocked Sasuke was willing to go that far towards Sakura.
Do The Roar2012 chapter 14 . 2/13/2014
Sai is quite skilled to handle both Jugo and Suigetsu. I like how Karin actually has skills in this story. Ah Sakura a flick? Should of broke her neck!

Tsukuyomi so he can use it just has good has Itachi hmmm damn you Sasuke. That's right Sakura you make sure he knows you mean it! Brilliant chapter.
Do The Roar2012 chapter 13 . 2/13/2014
Suigetsu shut up. Naruto would beat you into a oblivion. Hmm you would think Karin would have some feelings against her fellow Uzumaki but eh she is too far up Sasuke's rear end to care for anything else.

Really hope Naruto teaches that lalala a lesson.
Do The Roar2012 chapter 12 . 2/13/2014
Negema is a creepy old dude isn't he. Guess he likes them young... very young.. Giggity :D

Grrr Sasuke I look forward to Naruto putting you on your ass one day.

Feel sorry for the emissary. He finally got a job that he enjoyed, a nice peaceful one.
Do The Roar2012 chapter 11 . 2/13/2014
I'm glad Karui's getting on Sakura's case about Naruto.

Damn you Uchiha. Seriously this is just a brilliant story.
Do The Roar2012 chapter 10 . 2/13/2014
How amusing to find Karui has the hots for Naruto. LMFAO the way Killer Bee made his proposition to Sakura was just.. too much! I was laughing hard at that.

Glad you stuck to Omoi personality so well :D
Do The Roar2012 chapter 9 . 2/13/2014
I feel so sorry for Konohamaru. He lost his best friend and how his sensei but wow what a technique!
Do The Roar2012 chapter 8 . 2/13/2014
Poor Konohamaru with the scars. I really like this!
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