Reviews for The River
forbidenjutsu chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
i know you wrote this for someone else obut thanks for writing it i think it one of few i have read and i love it
Shiho chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
I knew there had to be a story featuring these two! I liked the present tense, too. Nice job! So cute. :3
kateison chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
I'm writing this on my mobile, so please excuse its short nature. First: I cannot give you enough love for writing these two. Second: and so well, too! This was very well done, soft and sentimental, a pleasure to read.

Keep up the good work!
EvilReceptionistOfDoom chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
This was well-written, which I did not expect. (Always nice to stumble on a writer who can actually write!) It's not a pairing that would have occurred to me watching the show! (But hey, why not?) XDX
Dancing Bones chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
3

The present tense used just made the story so much more sensual and lovely.

Very nice work.
Lunacat13 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Aww - Lovely. I think it was while watching the episode last night, I noticed that those two, should they have one, would have a really hot affair. And an adorable relationship

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story
lynixe chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
that was a really sweet one

but i never expect jin/shuga

keep up the good work
Ishanatur chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I love this and I have never even heard of Serei no Moribito

dammn you asuka... i cant afford to get addicted to any other fandoms!

oh btw just nitpicky grammar - the line

'Instruments that Jin dived to find before they were washed away'

it should be dove ...
MeLaiya chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I loved this, it was so sweet. First time I saw the series I knew they would be at least ONE of the hot pairings in these things. Its just icing on the cake that an excellent author like yourself would write something about to turn people onto the pairing for life. Anyhoo, basically great job and please keep up the good work. And if ya want...you can...maybe...MAKEALEMON? Just a thought, ok by.