Reviews for Walls of Smoke
Ms. Liana chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
This was really nice. Beautiful choice of words. You are a great writer. Don't stop writing.
crzy4anime chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
for some reason i pictured maureen as the inexperienced one cause only joanne could say something this dorky: "We could...play chess?" absolutely fantastic and i could really feel the characters even if you weren't originally going for them. keep up the superb work. ~_~Suchi~_~
HerOathKeeper chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That was absolutely LOVELY.

I enjoyed how poetic it all was. The words were beautifully chosen, but they didn't mask what was happening one bit. All of our resident perverts (myself included) still got the idea and all the dirty details. :)

My only comment is that since I know you didn't write this with Maureen and Joanne in mind, I know you probably weren't thinking about the mention of eye color in the first paragraph. Blue on blue, it says. But... I don't think Joanne has blue eyes. Haha. A minor thing, luckily.

That was a joy to read. Thank you so much.
fromcoldtofire chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
That was really pretty :) I liked it.
GorgeousSmile chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Very nice! I loved it. it was very well written. Poetic even. :)