|Reviews for Dreaming of Butterflies|
| Soledad Sanchez chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
always always the stupid Bella, selfish, weak and silly girl with inferiority complex.
| Soledad Sanchez chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
too bad if you abandoned it, first chapter and I already like it.
| mowmers chapter 14 . 9/3/2017
I'm certain this is abandoned. But it was beautiful and I am glad I found it, and maybe someday you'll come across it and finish.
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/21/2016
I have really enjoyed what you have written!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Some one adopt it the writer abandon it its too perfect tooo be leaved :(((((((( this is my second fav of all jacob bella fanfics that i ever read first is bella,s guittar by amanda forks
This stories jake is soooooooooooo sweeeeet and real thaty its crime to leave him alone the plot is great there should be a message for bella to find out its uniqe this bella is more intresting than the original one ahhhh its really sad this story didnt have a chance to be finished
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/26/2015
So Bella fucks jakje over again. Which shows that that bellas selfishness and creepy, sick outlook was firmly entrenched before any sparklespires came along. whgat a pathetic looser. No version of Bella is sympathetic or someone you can rally wish good things for. she is only capable of hurting and taking. she gives nothing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
Falling in "love" with a pale creepy reanimated corpse. An abusive lieing manipulative mass murderer. Way to go Bella. So what have we here? Another Bella gets to use Jake as her personal doormat kind of tale?
| Egratia chapter 14 . 6/7/2015
You know, you left it on a note that it could be finished. It could be.
I'd like to see more of Jake and Bells, but who wouldn't.
I'm not frustrated with this conclusion.
But I would like to see more. Or, to see you click the "Complete" button.
Thank you for your ideas. It was clever.
| Egratia chapter 13 . 6/7/2015
Okay, it's been over 5 years and I'm about to get to the last chapter. I know it's not done because my led me here and she says it isn't.
Get on the ball. Law school is over. You should have passed the bar by now. First few years in them firm should be over.
Finish this story, please.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 11 . 6/4/2015
Oh god. How does she know the name Claire Young. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to the familiar name. This story has me thoroughly addicted.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 10 . 6/4/2015
Bella sharing her alternative universe with real life Jake was great and some what cathartic for the character. I can't wait untill Bella get to see Edward in the real world.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 9 . 6/4/2015
She's alone. Jake finally had enough of her crazy. One would think that after the events of the day... Now would be a good time to seek professional help. But no, we all know she won't. But where's the fun in that! Great chapter.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 8 . 6/4/2015
Who is the woman in the brown dress? A hallucination I assume. How exciting.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 7 . 6/4/2015
What an honest and natural reaction to grief from Charlie. I just can't stress enough how much I love this story and the web you're weaving.
| MarinaNamaste chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
It's so important that she saw that photo of Carsile and Esme in the UCLA sunshine. Important for the character to sort out her sanity, and for us readers to know the writer isnt going to suprise us later. Such an ingenious way to have her find the evidence she needed. I love way you're peeling back the layers of this story. Love it.