Reviews for Alone chapter 1 . 4/5
F apologizing! If someone were to keep me from my babies, no one would have survived. Tear them apart and hold my babies as they watch, knowing I have the control I need to protect and care for them.
Poetgirl616 chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
If she didnt trust him why did she kiss him last chapter? She shouldnt say she forgives him if she doesnt trust him. That doesnt seem logical.
Poetgirl616 chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Well so much for a different story. Why in every story does she automatically go back even after he leaves? The realistic thing for her to do is to stay angry at him longer than you have her being. He practically spit in her face. He was smiling while she was in frigging tears! And you write her giggling and letting him kiss her?! Hell to the no! I wouldve smacked him. Thats the logical thing when somene who supposedly loves you is smiling when you cry.
Smileyfacey chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
What does Ellie-may, and Anthony look like?
ValeAyita21 chapter 11 . 2/20/2011
i love this story
LunarFairyPrincess1989 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
love the story!
BellaMarie310 chapter 21 . 7/29/2009
that was a very cute story i loved it and can't wait for the sequel :)
MgaoqiaoM chapter 21 . 7/29/2009
okay! Write the sequel soon!
MgaoqiaoM chapter 20 . 7/29/2009
This is good! Keep writing! SEQUEL!
MyLola xx chapter 19 . 7/28/2009
Great story,

i've put it on story alert XO
Sol Spell Diggory chapter 19 . 7/28/2009
Why wouldn't they just listen to Jasper?


Good chap!

Update it soon!
JaspersNumberOneLover chapter 19 . 7/27/2009
i 3 it so much plz plz plz contuine
MgaoqiaoM chapter 19 . 7/27/2009
This is good! update soon!
brooke cullen chapter 18 . 7/27/2009
u hav 2 update hav to!
brooke cullen chapter 6 . 7/27/2009
i like it alot. how come the chapters are like, really short
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