Reviews for Love Unseen
Ani Illuri chapter 1 . 5/19
I think I might've cried when I read this... Beautifully written, in the style of the time, and it was touching and poignant. To be honest, I've always wondered what Teddy wrote to Emily in that letter. But overall, it was really good :D
LongLiveThorn chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Oh I WISH this could have gone to Emily! That would have made the story WAY less confusing...
FullMentalPanic chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
As I've said, I do like Teddy and Emily together, but the way the story languished in contrived romantic tension was profoundly frustrating. Why couldn't the author pick a different source of conflict! I feel like this is a good representation of what he would write and it's phrased in just the right way that he would think she was rejecting him if she didn't respond. I do have to go more with the "don't have the guts to say it to your face" explanation more than the "I didn't have time to tell you" when writing this letter probably took awhile.
IrregularHonour chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I never knew the story of Vega of the Lyre, until I read it in your story. You wove it in beautifully.
HarmonyWinters chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Wow. I loved the Emily trilogy...and this was believable and in character for Teddy.

Too bad his mother kept them apart so long.

Well done.
leslie chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
wow beautiful!
EverloyalPoptart chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Squee doesn't even begin to cover it , hon. I always wanted to know what that letter said, and this is the next best thing! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Much love and cookies,

Everloyal~
CompanionWanderer chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Very well-written. It's one of my pet peeves in the Emily books that Teddy becomes less and less dimensional as the series goes on - it's like Montgomery didn't know quite what to do with him as an adult. Little things like this would have served to flesh him out more. You've struck a nice note - sweet without being too schmaltzy, and providing a glimmer into Teddy's character.
loveandsqualor chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully written and very teddy-like.
A Forgotten One chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
so beautiful :)

i love the comparison with vega of the Lyre and their love. its so muddled yet so wonderful and...well, just beautiful.

:) lovely and poetic

write more

AFO