|Reviews for Wishing You Were Real|
| Zakhariahz chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
why won't you write more? :(
| Mgg1606 chapter 6 . 12/28/2011
OK, so I read all 6 chapters in 2 days, I was to excited to learn more about B and E's dynamic since he is dead and a ghost, this as I told you before, reminds me of American Horror Story, with out the killing and gross ghosts, it is very different I love it and I would totally love it more if you updated. Seriously are you OK?, bc it's been a really long time since you updated!
OK, so hope your OK, and just very very busy, and hopefully writing the next 6 chapters of this story. LOL
| brittany86 chapter 6 . 1/29/2010
it was a good chapter but y wont he let anyone read his journal? It has 2 have what happened 2 him in it! UPDATE SOON
| jewlzncoolz chapter 6 . 12/18/2009
update soon please
this is really good stuff
| Zakhariahz chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
i really like this story and the pace of it. please update soon.
| ParentingTipsDaily chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This chapter was intriguing. I like that there is a little mystery to solve. I am curious about who had a purple room if Edward was an only child and Bella picked his room as her own.
| AH Darling chapter 6 . 10/2/2009
hello-just wondering if you'll be cont this story? It's very good!
| philyra-tales chapter 6 . 8/30/2009
I thought that this chapter was very well done, as per all the other chapters. :D I thought you wrote the balance between the cheerful parts of the story and the more heavy parts dealing with the drama.
I really liked the part when Edward sounded hopeful at the prospect that Bella may actually liked him. It was so sweet and endearing and just SO Edward.
I wished Bella had asked Edward about Renee. Perhaps it's like The Ghost Whisperer; where Renee didn't have unfinished business knowing that Bella would be safe with Charlie whilst Edward still has some personal business to take care of.
I also really had hoped that Edward had told Bella why Carlisle ended up selling the house. Perhaps this detail will be told in later chapters. :D All in all, an excellent update!
| m7707 chapter 6 . 8/27/2009
This is a great premise for the characters, I really like the idea. You've done a great job in making it intriguing. I;m looking forward to more.
| Moon6Shadow chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE!
| Callmecrazy17 chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
Really origional story! It's nice to see somthing different and creative. please update soon!
| Meghan.Alice chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
curious why it is rated m.
really loving it by the way.
i like the storyline!
| Shamatt0403 chapter 6 . 8/14/2009
This is interesting. It is slightly like ghost but not in the wet clay in your fingers way.
| johannal chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Found your story today and I really like it.
| magalovic chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Ok, I came across this story on twilighted and I thought I would give it a try, but I couldn't stop reading, this is one of the most original Fanfic's I have ever read. It is def intriguing. I cannot wait until you update. SO I am showing you some love so you better update!