|Reviews for Wintersong|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
so beautiful and sad, i loved it!
| smiley.purple.dragon1 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
I love this, especially the end part - I was literally crying :) And with the chronology, I understood it perfectly well, so don't worry :)
| elfling14 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I was a little iffy about the "non-chronological" bit at first, but it actually made sense. Because you started with Marlene about to die, most of it seemed very "my life is flashing before my eyes." It worked well. Then when Sirius' train of thought came in at the end, it seemed rather natural because he had been the central figure in Marlene's life. Maybe not your intention, but it works really well!
| mercurywrites chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Oh my goodness, that was so wonderful. Great. Brilliant. Just...wow!
| coolpearls chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
No, I don't think the chronology was that confusing. I really liked it! Good job.
| theblackinkwitch chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
My turn! I really loved this- Marlene and Sirius/ Marlene and Gideon are among my favourite pairings and you got them both so perfectly. I love the part where you write about not needing ostentatious beauty to get him- I totally believe that! And I understood the order of things, so no foul there.