Reviews for No Choice |
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melliel211 chapter 23 . 14h I know it's been 11 years or so, but I hope you are okay. But the fact the second half of the chapter was never posted means something bad had to have happened I wish only the best for you |
live.small.joys chapter 23 . 11/29 Hi! I love this story! Thank you for writing it. I havd eds too:) |
jbjswiss chapter 9 . 10/24 Ngl this chapter actually made me ship Bella/Jacob a little for the first time. The whole ‘forbidden lovers’ aspect of them being together as a wolf & vamp is lowkey compelling. I mean Jake clearly still loves her even though she’s a vamp now, and you don’t see that often in Fics. |
EdandAlicelover9 chapter 23 . 10/24 I am so so sorry you've been in pain. But I wanted to thank you for this incredible story! I have LOVED the relationships between Jasper and Bella and Rose and Bella. And the work Edward is having to put in to be forgiven is filling a hole of resentment the original story left! Thank you! |
The Empress Narwhal chapter 23 . 10/11 Creative story and great writing. I am so glad I read it. |
EndlessGloaming chapter 23 . 8/10 Well, it's been 11 years since this was updated, so I realize it's unlikely you'll see this, but just in case, I am sorry to hear about the ED'S. I know two people who have it, milder forms, and it still sucks. I hope you're doing well 3 I've just loved this story. I've so wanted them to actually deal with some of their relationship dysfunctions, so this has been great. For now I suppose I'll have to imagine how it ends, but just in case, I did subscribe. |
EndlessGloaming chapter 22 . 8/10 I have been so hooked on this story. It's got so much of that good heart-twisting angst, and now, she's finally getting mad at him, which she never does as much as he deserves, so it's very satisfying. |
EndlessGloaming chapter 4 . 8/9 Dang, what a start! Exciting and well paced. I like the premise. |
Teamrob2 chapter 23 . 5/13 :):) |
Kementari13 chapter 23 . 11/8/2023 I know this hasn't been updated in ten years but WOW I just gotta say that this is a BEAUTIFULLY written story and I enjoyed reading to so much. Thank you! |
Foenix2phorks chapter 23 . 11/3/2023 Hello, . The story you created is heartbreaking and beautiful. I sincerely hope one day you will be able to complete it, but I understand if you cannot. The last two or three chapters gave a good idea how their HEA will play out, so that is what I will imagine for them - at least until you say otherwise! I hope you are happy where ever you may be. Thank you for writing and sharing. :-) |
Maryam chapter 23 . 10/13/2023 Hello. First, this is one of the best written twilight fanfictions out there. The perfect amount of Canon, and originality, and capturing the tone of Bella and make your own changes. I was over the twilight Fandom for over 7 years now and only recently started looking for a new thing related to twilight. I am usually a grammar nazi and I just can't stand reading senseless, bad language or stupid plot lines that show the writer's desires than actually creating a good story. But i finished your story in 2 days, it was that well written. While I would wish that you continue with it, having read your note, I can understand. Which brings me to this. My thoughts and prayers go out to you. May you get better, may the pain lessen, may you live a beautiful life ahead. |
Pinkypi chapter 23 . 10/1/2023 I don't know if you're still around on here or such. But I had a friend we called her Juju on LoL she had the same thing. Couldn't even pick up a light box for work without something dislocating it was rough. I hope you are still around and doing well though. This was pretty good to read. |
IzzyAlvarez chapter 10 . 9/29/2023 Loving this story so very much, it's wonderfully written. I just wanted to mention that Edward's piano was white in the books (Insignificant I know) but I suppose there's a mix of facts here between the books and the movies, although I have noticed mostly details from the books. Anyways, your work is wonderful, easily the best Twilight fanfiction I have read to date. |
FICTIONAL-STAR chapter 23 . 9/7/2023 This story is fantastic. I don’t have your talent, so all I can say is that it’s beyond words. I hope you’re doing better, Sam! And I hope one day you’ll revisit this story. Take care of yourself! |