Reviews for No Choice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know this hasn't been updated in ten years but WOW I just gotta say that this is a BEAUTIFULLY written story and I enjoyed reading to so much. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, . The story you created is heartbreaking and beautiful. I sincerely hope one day you will be able to complete it, but I understand if you cannot. The last two or three chapters gave a good idea how their HEA will play out, so that is what I will imagine for them - at least until you say otherwise! I hope you are happy where ever you may be. Thank you for writing and sharing. :-) |
![]() ![]() Hello. First, this is one of the best written twilight fanfictions out there. The perfect amount of Canon, and originality, and capturing the tone of Bella and make your own changes. I was over the twilight Fandom for over 7 years now and only recently started looking for a new thing related to twilight. I am usually a grammar nazi and I just can't stand reading senseless, bad language or stupid plot lines that show the writer's desires than actually creating a good story. But i finished your story in 2 days, it was that well written. While I would wish that you continue with it, having read your note, I can understand. Which brings me to this. My thoughts and prayers go out to you. May you get better, may the pain lessen, may you live a beautiful life ahead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you're still around on here or such. But I had a friend we called her Juju on LoL she had the same thing. Couldn't even pick up a light box for work without something dislocating it was rough. I hope you are still around and doing well though. This was pretty good to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story so very much, it's wonderfully written. I just wanted to mention that Edward's piano was white in the books (Insignificant I know) but I suppose there's a mix of facts here between the books and the movies, although I have noticed mostly details from the books. Anyways, your work is wonderful, easily the best Twilight fanfiction I have read to date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is fantastic. I don’t have your talent, so all I can say is that it’s beyond words. I hope you’re doing better, Sam! And I hope one day you’ll revisit this story. Take care of yourself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely the best twilight fan fiction I've ever read. I loved how you strengthened the Collin characters, giving them depth and compassion. I think your Bella was a much more enjoyable read. She got the tragic angst filled love journey but seemed more fleshed out, motivated and real compared against the original work. I liked that she got to show fortitude under duress ect. Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would have slapped him silly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() he's a stubborn S.O.B.! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when Edward does come back Jasper is going to give him the beat down he deserves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is Jacob being such a putz? he's much to young for Bella, despite his size and he knows she is in love with Edward. even if Edward never came back she most likely would never have felt like that for him anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does Alice think Bella wanted space, did Edward lie to her too? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this I had various thoughts, both in appreciation and citique but I'll save those. I binge read this while sick myself and it's a morbid thing to see that a last ever update from an author carries such a solemn note. All I can hope for is that wherever you are, you're happy and free of pain. Your story captivated me. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wherever you are, I hope you’re doing okay and staying strong. Thank you so much for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The goodbye with Jake left me with tears streaming down my face. Loved it. Thank you very much. |