Reviews for No Choice
parkesy23 chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
Great thanks.
parkesy23 chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
Great thanks
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Look forward to reading thanks
Maguffium239 chapter 23 . 6/26/2013
This is a really good story all on its own, but to write it with the obstacles you've had to overcome... Wow. I am in awe of you! Thank you so very, very much for writing.
JShay chapter 23 . 6/25/2013
Awesome...please keep up the good work. Take care of yourself and best wishes.
Liv-Love-Work-Play-READ chapter 23 . 6/24/2013
Your story is amazing and with your illness doing so well is truly inspirational xxx I would love to read the end eventually and am glad that you took the time to read this x thanks xxxx
Philodice chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I loved this fic when I read it, months ago but I lost it.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 13 . 6/22/2013
That poem is amazing.
Narges chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
She's so awfully hurt and lonley among others :(
Narges chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
first Bambi, and then "my moose" ...aww, she's the most compssionate vampire.
Narges chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
It was a frightening chase. I'm trying to catch my breath ;)
Fangscape chapter 23 . 6/18/2013
Wow, and I thought my torn ligament in my lower back was bad. I can't imagine what you go through. Thank you for this chapter. It is very well written. I've loved this story for a long time.

If there is any way you can get Dragon Naturally speaking, that might relieve some pain if you still want to write. It is a voice recognition software. It's not perfect, but it would cut down a lot on key strokes.

I'm sure any one of us would be glad to correct the little issues with spelling and usage that the program creates. Let me know if you want some help.
Anabely chapter 23 . 6/14/2013
I think you are writing a very good fic. I like Jasper a lot, in particular, but you have done everyone's personalities well.

I think the idea about human blood affecting change is very clever. It does have the same flaw as the original book, though, which is Jasper. How could he have possibly changed so much?

Anyway, I am a little bothered by the idea that Bella needs to find a way to forgive Edward, but he is not expected to change his behavior for her to do so. I know the character Bella would feel that way but that is because she has really low self-esteem. Forgiving someone is fine but having a relationship with them is something else. Bella was right that Edward should stop making decisions without her and there is nothing wrong with her saying that to him.
Necrosanct chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
This is an excellent fan-fiction. There is no teenaged drama detected. In fact, there appears to be no drama beyond what is pertinent; that is absolutely magnificent.

I must express my confusion over one aspect of the Twilight universe. My confusion stems from the fact that the Denali sisters obviously indulge in human men. Of course, the books make mention of how it is easier for a female vampire to share physical intimacy with a human male, but Twilight vampire physiology makes this particular coupling an impossibility. If the flesh of a vampire embodies the physical traits found in marble, the only possible vampire/human coupling would be that of a male vampire and a human female.
From Bella's experiences of touching Edward
when she was human, a human being cannot impact the inert state of vampire flesh. This is especially true, since the books made mention of vampire flesh being impervious even to bullets.
The vaginal canal expands to accommodate the phallus; otherwise, it would be unable to successfully perform its function.
How on Earth would a human male be able to physically join with a vampire female if all of the above is so? Where would that human male find the strength required for penetration? Easy answer: he would not.
By the laws of the Twilight universe, coitus between a human male and a vampire female is an absolute impossibility.

This fan-fiction is a gem. If it is not complete, I sincerely hope it will be someday.
Edmazing chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
Jacob is so good to her. Sure, what he's saying makes sense, but wow, it's a hard choice to make.
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