Reviews for Orla's Story
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I am never going to forget the image of several different macho marines flirting with and asking Ronon out that this story gave me. I can just imagine the befuddlement on his face. Priceless.
angel897 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
liked it
Shellbean chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Hey there Vana1970,
That was a great story. I think Ronon deserves a good woman. Shellbean:)
PinkDough chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Is that the end?
Kitty Biddy10 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Wow, that was really good. Just as I imagined how Ronon might act around someone he actually liked. Nice new character, Orla.
Mechia132 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
After reading Return of Childhood. Went and started reading your other story about Orla and Ronon. Love this one and and about have way throw the one right before it and will let you know. You are very good. Keep up the great work.
GypsyWitchBaby chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Love the story, I think you really wrote Ronon well.
fred21 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Great story, really enjoyed it
DaniWilder chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Thought I would put down a review so you know I read your story :)

I loved the use of 'Indeed' LMAO the first time I heard Ronon mention that to Teal'C. (You should do a Ronon POV on that episode!)

Loved the scientist's sparring. I adore Radek and just wish I could think of a girl for him. Maybe Orla can have an older cousin or something? :)

DW
LMXB chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I really enjoyed this. The part where Ronon said 'indeed' was funny. I thought you portrayed McKay really well and I loved the childish streak in Shep.